OK first of look like it’s gonna start getting really good but the character development return it to complete retard and then every elder in this entire story is complete trash. I don’t know if the author has a problem with the elders, but he turned them all into retards, so I’m done this is not good.
The story is wonderful. He acts very similar to katou kid, the only parts that I did not like were that he got partners and that the story stopped in the middle of a chase. With his system he could have done it by himself. The story does not get to the part where the partners have helped him before the story stopped. The story is written very well, I only noticed one flaw where the detective suspected something he had no reason to suspect.
As of the time I am making this review ( 5/19/2023) i have finished 278 chapters, and all I can say is that I am amazed by this authors genius.For the review I will split it into 5 sections Writing Quality, Stability of Updates, Story Development, Character Design.Writing Quality:5/5The writing quality is superb, The language and depictions on environments emotion and everything in-between thoroughly immerses the reader into the characters.Stability of updates:5/5as of 5/19/2023 the author updates the the story with a chapter everyday sometimes even multiple.Story Development:5/5The story development is phenomenal. It evolves throughout the entire story leaving the reader eagerly waiting for the next development. The author expertly weaves the story through the characters and unlike many other authors makes the story feel alive and connected.Character Design:5/5The character Design is the best part of the book the author not only explores the emotion and depth of the main character but others as well. Not only that but the character development of the main character is the best I have ever seen on webnovel, The main character goes through many struggles evolving his perspective on himself, the world and others. If you are looking for a purely evil main character this story is not for you. The main character is more than a villain. He is a human, he evolves and changes and although at some points he is villainous that is not all he is.World Background:4/5Although the World background is the worst part of the 4 other points of review it is still fairly good. The author does go into detail about the background of the world but in the grand scheme of the story I feel as though it's not enough. (spoilers ahead) The dimension's that the main character goes to don't have that much substance, you cant really feel the background that these dimension's have affecting the story in any tangible manner and you don't really feel engaged in what happens to the dimensions, For example the main character goes to a realm which is massive, thousands of kingdoms within a single empire, the leader of each kingdom being stronger than the main character. what's unfortunate is that you never really feel engaged with the empire/kingdoms. making them feel rather 1 dimensional. You really feel this 1 dimensionality when some kingdoms to war and you don't really care or feel intrigued about the outcome of the world. That being said I don't really think it dragged the story down that much because the story is more focused of the development of the main character and those around him.---------------------------------------------------------------------------Perhaps my thoughts on this book will worsen but so far this is one of if not the best stories on webnovel, would definitely recommend.
The Base concept of the novel has a decent line for the story. The troubles Start with the Author's lack of knowledge about the location written about. He makes the setting in the United States but doesn't have the back ground for the things talked about. The SAT exam is a multiple choice test taken for college entrance. This test is scored with a numerical grade without any letters of A+ through F. The grading is not done by teachers but is scanned by machine. The scores are not announced publicly but are either mailed or E-mailed to the participants.
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While I will give the author props for writing this, I hope you take the criticism of checking the details about your content better.
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low quality fantasy simulator.
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Novels like these have fucking 4k chp. Can somebody tell me which godly chinese novel has the most no. Of overall chp in raws. I want to know thier level of shamelessness.....
interesting plot and thought to not take any sides and be neutral please keep writing .........................................................
This is a good novel, unfortunately it is one of MAdsnails abandoned (permanent Hiatus) novels that ended in 2012 .-__-.
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Hennloo!! This is the author, I just wanna leave a disclaimer stating that
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