Writing is rushed and seems to be an imitation of Astral Pet Store, so originality wise it's just a copy even the most of the plots I.e Old man with pet food and the first few customers. I could stand that, but the plot lines are quite squished together with not much story, not much monologue either and just tries with cheap tricks that makes no sense.
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too much trash talk to fill up word count 2 fast pass for only a few sentences worth of actual story progression
was kinda nice until chapter 215 or so in the raws.. after that simulator upgraded and author became lazy.. very lazy in fact.. very very boring to read.. in the real world all 3 tool people are very very stupid.. even though they have probably several thousand years of experience, experience in failing several times, yet make the most stupidest of mistakes.. especially the first tool person.. she's portrayed to be very very cautious in the sims and much much more cautious in the real world, but makes the stupidest mistakes in the real world.. honestly it's disappointing
the system gets stronger, and he gets more abilities. The more he possesses people, so in 19 chapters, he possesd 1 person..... not even worth being bathroom reading material
The flow of the story is well written. The title may give the impression of typical Chinese faceslapping novel (at least not yet) but it's a crime/mystery with a little bit of comedy and a system to assist the host. I also love the detail where a quest about solving the cases only appear if the case were handed or picked up by the MC. The only nitpick I probably have is the rewards of the system is a little bit overboard.
Alright, I usually don't write reviews, but I feel like this piece of c*** novel actually deserves one. I read until chapter 515, so I'm definitely qualified to give this review. My advice, don't read this novel. The author is racist beyond belief and uses skin tone to judge whether a person should be killed or not. And there is so much filler!!! The author uses at least 4 to 5 chapters, which we can just skip as it's not even relevant to the MC or the main plot, to just describe the various worlds and life stories of the people that inhabit them. And worst of all, once the the story reaches a certain point, the author decides to scrap the MCs cultivation and makes him start over for the second time. Almost everything he owned up until now has all been destroyed. In other words, completely wasting 500 chapters worth of our time and SS. I actually felt so cheated when I read up to this point. I read through all that arrogance, racism, filler and double crossing moments to just end up right back at square one. I assure you, I am not amused. All that time spent reading this novel was completely wasted!!!! This is a warning to all the readers, do not be fooled by how well the first few hundred chapters seem as the story's going to take a 180 degree turn.
the idea is nice but world building and explanation for the template are lack luster. this story has a lot of room for growth. the mc is a bit confusing as well.
I actually really liked this story despite all its flaws. I can tell that the author gradually grew as they wrote more, and I honestly think the story was progressing in a good direction. Despite this, there were quite a few plot holes and weird jumps in logic, but I think it was moreso due to a lack of experience in writing. I hope you continue to write and grow.
So I somehow accidentally made an alt account lol. No idea how. I decided to just go to every other story I ever read and just vote 5 stars on them cause why not. Not like I'm ever gonna use this again after this right.
Ok a advocate yandere fan I will dive in to this novel and enjoy it to my heart's content but I'll also review more seriously it after 40 so chapters if I don't fall into the dark but wonderful world of laziness
this book is really good bro, please update some more. This is genuinely the only good basketball online novel I have ever read. You got some serious talent.