A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
You know I don’t wish to come off as a hater but so far iv read up to 10 chapters and all I can say is this book is trash
The story is compelling and has a wonderful twist...I recommend it. to sci Fi and adventure lovers out there...it opens us to different worlds
Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in!Things to expect from this story...1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head. 2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning. 3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood. 4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff.5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected.5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes!6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises.7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character.8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think.Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect ?
good story so far! hope this continues.It's not too cliche, and the starting plot is cool. The side characters are realistic. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
I loved Mike's selfreflections and internal comments. There were lots of places I loughed out loud. In a way he reminds me of Dexter (another character I like so much) Overal I've really enjoyed this story. Thank you.
I'm not good at explaining so I'll just say that it has bad grammar and some other problems, plus I'm not a big fan of how he's starting to turn out so yea
I really like the author's ideas and how his plots progress. The character development is nice and the constant updates too. The world background also put me in a different world of my own imagination. Kepp up the good work!! :))
A wonderful tale of a bastard in charge of a guild of cut throat mercenaries, any one of which in polite society would be strung up and beaten with a stick. From comical misha** of a cowardly warrior forcefully conscripted to a plushie loving one eyed berserker woman, from a towering crude titanblood to a happy go lucky eldritch horror associating warlock, from a wonderfully lewd demonic woman to a horse wanted for murder. There's no end to original characters who are funnier, crazier and down right entertaining from their first introductions to their exits stage right.Read this book if you want anti heroes, scheming bastards, an MC who is a male medusa and an author who brings all these inglorious bastards to life with seeming ease and no end of flare!
My favourite book right now. The reason I wake up in the morning?. Like the author said there is some grammar mistakes but you barely even notice them! I highly recommend reading this book. Thank you for the updates author!
this person he or she is A TRUE PERSON. THANK GOD U DID THIS, IT WAS THE ONLY GOOD BOOK I HAVE SEEN IN A LONG TIME ON TRIAL READ. ONCE AGAIN THANK THANK THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!++++!!
For the first few chapters, I was uncertain if I would like the story. I was afraid 'cause there were so many ways it could turn out bad... the pucker factor was pretty high... luckily the storyline smoothly avoided the pitfalls other authors seem to routinely fall into and I actually fell in love with all the characters... it's now one of my favorite comedies