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The Dark Fields
Disgusting story, apparently some people think abuse is entertaining and "character building" this story makes me want to vomit.
I'm definitely digging this so far! What funky dreams he's having. He'd better not ignore an angels advice, delusions or not! The writing is fantastic and clear. The world building is great.
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I thought this novel was going to be a dump with cliches and nonsense, but I found myself loving the story and its originalness, especially for such an overpopulated genre.
The only downside is that the chapters are too short, and the story seems slower.
I didn't expect to find a book where the author actually explains what qi could be and doesn't use plotarmor in a vague way like cultivation works because of qi and qi is qi.
I like how the author thinks and didn't find obvious mistakes in the math and science parts.
there are a few minor points that could lead to a strong power creep between the later stages if you consider that core cultivators can already destroy mountains from a distance but it should be fine if he stops the exponential growth he currently has between the stages. sure fighting higher stages should be almost impossible but it shouldn't be 1000 vs 1 that is one stage higher and the one is winning without problems or getting hit. at least after the core stage where everyone knows techniques and has a good amount of qi.
but that is just me rambling about things that are hard to balance and would be normally readjusted over time while writing but because it is WN and we read the first version, the author has to think more about thinks like that because it is so hard to rewrite entire scenes or plot points.
Writing Quality: Not bad but can be better (3)
Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3)
Plot Development: i cant say much bc only 8ch. but i dont understand nothing i think you need to add more text to pre-story or make lore deeper (3)
Character Design: not bad but i cant inmaginate yourself ah MC (3)
Prehistory of the World: sorry for repeat but you need more lore to understand what world it is (3)
Verdict: not bad? but need a lot of work. I didn’t like it yet, I just can’t feel myself in the place of the MC, or at least cheer for it. I don't think I will follow it. but! I can wish the author inspiration and a light hand.
I really enjoy this type of genre normally but I just couldn't read further. The chapters are littered with spelling mistakes, the dialogue seem forced and unrealistic and the pace is through the roof. I really wanted to keep reading but the writing quality is not good. 5/5 for updating stability though.
i love it :)
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There’s typo rarely, but development is really fast and this is very good thing, because story need to be fast(first 50 chapters are the most important, if you want to have fan base, of course),sometimes drama and many plots, dynamic fights, more powerfull realms, more heh, you know.
I giving 100% of stars, just for you.
Good luck, Author.
A very unique approach to storytelling with a nice personal touch. The author has seamlessly blended politics with history and created a realistic and gritty world.
this book is the best on this up no cap read this bro right now I thought he was a nobody until now my boy Hahito showing his true colours ³