Its a generic novel.The idea of forger transmigrator is interesting, but the execution is pathetic. The mc is same old mc trait, but barely on intellectual spectrum, but the other side characters only a handful of them actually have brain. The story is boring, world building pretty much almost non-existent i can’t imagine the whole beijing (heh) and the forging division, character improvement is decent and thats it like a bean sprouting and then stagnant, the plot is mediocre, the leveling system is unclear.Meh.
The only issue this novel has is not enough chapters. Read this book, you will love it. I think I’ve reread some parts like 10 times and the entire story atleast twice. The story is always interesting and everything has a meaning. There is no filler or bs and everything flows great. Now go make some tea or coffee and read this thing!
AMAZING READ..I love the way this novel goes although a little exaggerated and boring from time to time.. it's a pretty good read..anyone knows the RAW
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The more darker it gets the more I enjoy it .
The only problem with this novel is the name of the mc is not Bob when it clearly should have been bob however apart from that this is my favourite new novel after manaless magician.
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I read it only because of the goodness in people. Story too slow paced because author force some things to happens to justify things, but in the end at chapter 60 mc still not have a clue about his own power. In that world, people get power but they have nothing to fight (exept humans wars probably).Some issue with translation, sometimes using dollars, sometimes yuan...
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Plot is gold, although he needs to go through NTR. But we get a much better Issei than the original and warning genderbent Vali.
I really like the plot! The story has the potential to keep the readers hooked! I really like the way you presented the characters and background world! Good job author!
It is a decent novel, though it is my first time reading a goalkeeper novel and I really like it. It might be bored ng at starting but it gets good.