The translation I have read so far is fine, I do not know if it gets worse later on or not. So far to me it is about average compared to every other novel on the site. My problems with the story is that the author seems to be completely incapable of building up his characters and the worlds setting naturally and flow along with the story. Instead we get literally 10 paragraph info dumps about everything. It feels like I am reading a text book, not a novel. Not to mention in the 4th chapter, the author gives you the ending of the story. He completely spoils his entire novel and the synopsis you see above. He doe's it threw, yes you guess it a needless info dump that doesn't fit at all with flow of the chapter. It just appears out of no where and spoils it. Over half the fun of reading a story is finding out how it all comes to an end, yet here we see the end before it even begins.
Such an amazing novel. I really love how he uses people through out all of history and then even puts a twist on some more fictional ones. There are some minor faults such as the author more often than not will use the word thought for fought but it doesn't at all subtract from the quality of the overall story or the interesting quests and characters. Very well done all around and I am still stunned by just how much I am truly enjoying the journey.
I like it more than my favorite story ??
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not a bad fanfic seems to have a lot of potential hope you don't you don't drop seems to be going good from what I can see...…………………………...………...………...……………………...……………………...…………….
A perfect webnovel ??????????????????????????. Author continue to write more chapters and have more recent updates ???
A really damn good and funny novel. I don’t understand how it doesn’t have more readers. Good translation and editing too. Keep it on. ????
I give this review as a warning to save the poor souls that are about to read this book.I legitimately no lie reached a point where it became so unbearable that I was skipping chapters just so I can read the comments. All because I found the comments more interesting than the actual book.Feedback for the author:I liked the idea but the execution for it was very poorly done. This is very disappointing because the grammar was pretty good, but you dragged things for so long it became a chore to read.
It’s a great read the author is able to take a chunk of history and turn it in to a story that you get completely immersed into before you know it your done with it It’s a great bookKeep up the good work author Although there were something that I got stuck on like how ther were so many perspectives showed at once in completely different places which is normal it still flowed smoothly for the most part