very stable with updates, and to be honest it is a good story. HOWEVER , the writing is a bit funky, and grammer is pretty bad. not to the point it's unreadable , it can be enjoyed with a bit of effort. mc starts out horribly stupid however, and honestly the first 10 chapters will likely give you an aneurysm. character decisions do improve though. highly suggest Author find an editor though, it honestly the biggest thing holding this back.
KRARRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!
Author I love your writing style and my boy The Jack even when you added the romance!! The story was amazing I would say even 10* better just a little nervous what will happen when the baby come out I hope the story won’t end to fast..Because I’ m in love with this novel…Tbh I thought it would be totally trash but omg I wassss super wrong!!! Author keep it up man!!! Your work is amazing!!!! Can’ t wait for moreee chapters!!!!!
As someone who had read this beta, I can tell that you all are not prepared for what is about to come in the future. The author also liked to play with people's minds and I love that about them
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Okay, I read a couple of chapters. It starts well. The way it's written is good. The quality of English words used here makes this novel much more easier to read. When comes to such unique plot you need lot more clarity. The Author effort is commendable. If you are here for a fresh Novel experience give it a read.
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Hard to put down after picking up. I just wanted to keep reading it. the characters are well written and the interactions are well written and this is just well written in general. Definitely recommend.
THIS BOOK IS SOO COOL. It starts garb you in and so does the plot.It's a unique type, not much to be found.On the other hand, the writing is simple. Is a great story I would recommend all to read it.HOPE IT WINS.
Give the raw link please. It is a very good one. Please tell the raw name. Cant find it anywhere. ....................... .........plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz