Really Lovely BookThe descriptions of the scenes are accurate and helps my imagination quite a lot.Some missed grammar but they are very negligible.The plot is very interesting with little holes, The MC is strong but I still see some people who can deck him but cannot kill him.But I love the fact of no info dumbs at the very first chapterAlthough I do hate the fact that the system manipulated the mc but I was relieved that the mc noticed but decided to leave it, probably because it needs the system as much as it needs him.overall this novel is part of my must read.Thumbs up to Author??
This story is amazing so far but new chapters come out too slow to keep the interest of some of those who get to the newest chapters and are waiting for new ones to come out. While I understand that is important to take your time writing to make sure that new chapters are of good quality, the fast release of new chapters is also really important even if you have to shorten the chapter to achieve this. More but smaller chapters of the same quality will help you keep the attention of those readers that are less patient or invested in the story because they will notice a notification for a new chapter more often and keep it at the top of their library each time they open it to read the new chapter. It may also help you Increase your writing quality because you will be focusing on a smaller amount of work at a time.
its different from all those other modern cultivation novels and it's funny ................................................................
So... Where should I begin? The story looks interesting and I notice that the author did try describing the characters and the setting so we, readers, could imagine it. The problem with this was that the author over-described (if that's a word) both things. It made the story confusing instead of making it clear. The second thing is punctuation and grammar. There are too many run-off sentences while describing the characters. Use periods and commas. They are your friends. Also, use a grammar corrector program like Grammarly or just write your draft in MS Word so it corrects the mistakes before you post the story. Remember, good grammar can captivate the audience in this sea of stories. I do think that with a bit of polishing and editing, your story could go far.
it seems quite good. why is there aren't any tags? .
Another author that writes a hacker MC thst can hack into the government in a few minutes.________________________________________________________________________________
Great book but the story/questline proceed too slowly, they keep stalling everywhere and the main character hasn't even killed her first monster yet.
I don't know why such sad backstories make me sick of this, so much so that I'm ready to quit the novel, and I don't care that in the future you will somehow "change" his character, I don't care. After all, this does not happen in life, and I have enough of it, mc garbage.
Hypothesis the reason why in Chinese books daughters are so valued is to get back up the numbers they lost during the one child policy. That's or there's a whole bunch of pedophiles who write these novels.
This novel brings back the old power rangers villains concept and turns into something amazing.The story isn't rushed and every action has a valid reaction while not being to simple or overly convoluted. I haven't really made any reviews before so I can't put into words how good of a story this but I highly recommend potential readers to check this story out.
A wonderful novel,i love the concept of the cultivation
You all should try this novel,it’s a rare gem
Got me hooked on the first chapter
Good job author
I know you uploaded the novel, but it is very amazing. I've watched the anime a few times. Just hoping that it can live up to the hype. Just wondering if you're planning to upload more chapters.