Hello, Eshwar here. Due to something happening I kinds stressed out about it and the story had started to awry (not exactly sure how you feel, but I just feel like I added few fillers here and there), so from the next chapter I'll be back at my own pace, their won't be any noticeable changes though. Anyway, just wanted to let this be known, thank you for reading and. [Peace]
ahem, I have posted this in the recent chapter (Ch: Changes) it is just a copy and paste with few new words, anyway, hope you enjoy the story.
thank you for reading.
[Peace]
I think the story is quite well thought of, the intro already have something happening and we are later brought into more drama. The pacing is quite good.
The quality can be improved with some editing I believe, but the book, if done right have great potential.
Did I say I really like the book Cover! It looks so nice!
Everything is great. But truly, I only wanted to review to comment on the irony of the title and the cover.
My friend, if you wish to become the perfect specimen, please don't go following Voldemort's footsteps.
Hail Lord Vishnu
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If you love level up stories, this one is a perfect read for you! The MC is no genius but will adapt a way of cheat to survive in the dystopian world. It's a fresh breath of fresh air in the world of Leveling up theme.
All the best, author for the journey!
I like that MC have a proper goal, so the story will be followed well.
Read it if you like harem and obscene parts!
I really hope you will come back soon and continue this story, your book is why I installed webnovel
HEY AUTHOR , I AM ASKING TO UPLOAD NEW CHAPTERS IN " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " OR IF YOUR'RE NOT WANT TO CONTINUE JUST FINISH IT IN 10 - 15 CHAPTERS MORE SO IT HAS AN ENDING OR YOU WILL DO CONTINUE THE NOVEL" REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " IN FUTURE.YOUR'RE ALREADY DOING ANOTHER NOVEL WITH THIS ONE SO JUST FINISH THE " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " SO WE WILL GET SOME PIECE.
I really like the concept,and the translation also improves quite a bit after the first 10-15 ch.
first story that makes me actually like the MC as a human not as a character Tbh a lot of novels here are either edgelord guy or hero guy or the lovestruck girl with 20 IQ this one is the first that can actually be relatable if you were in the protagonists shoe's (she was bullied and stuff) I'm not really good at writing reviews and whatever but just wanna say that MC is relatable and cute and badass
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