The story is good and don't be fooled by the 5 year life the MC has, I know that the story becomes repetitive about killing, training, matches and other things to power up the MC but that's the thing the MC has a limited life span so the story has to progress about the mc getting stronger in shortest time possible while doing some other stuff at the side.
The work is not bad but unfortunately the author seems very simple, he seems a bit more of an extremist Chinese, all the chapters name China, and all the good events are focused on China, you should read a bit to realize it.The truth is, I liked giving it a better score, but it frustrated me so much and the author has ruined the work so much with his nationalism, so it can't be enjoyed.
this is a good novel. in the mtl there is a lot of comedy and actual risk. the system is not some omnipotent device but actively gets material to the point where mc has to weigh the risk of using it effectively. its also not q auto fight mechanic so the mc has to take charge every time he gets hit
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i like your novelhowever there are many stuff that are making it bad and this makes me to want to drop the novel atleast for now1.worldbackround very similar to other novels 2 story development is bad u just keep making everything bad every chapter there will be a hangclif and all the time you put the mc in the worst case scenario never 135c never did u give the mc a breath he always is on the losing end vs uncles daddys grandfathers greatgrandfathers grandmas and generaly ancestors he has 0 support nobody likes him im suprised by the second elder but even she cant do **** to support him she is even injured even her personal disciple doesnt like mc which is pure shiet if he had her support it would be much better 3 character design mc morals are horse**** yes the second elder helped him much and she sould get paid back hundredfold yes that other girl with the bow helped him A LOT and she should be paid for a lifetime i agree with those stuff he said BUT!!!!!! his father in law wanted to kill him and didnt just because he had good talent he wouldnt be in trouble in the first place if he didnt barge in with those stupid guards so i dont get his love for that guy. his fiancee xianer ONLY BRINGS HUUUUGE TROUBLE HUUUUGE TROUBLE AND EVEN MORE TROUBLE!thats all i think the fundation of the novel is bad and its not fixable because of the reasons aboveif in the future u still upload and i have seriously nothing to do and remeber this novel perhaps ill give it another try at that time
For those confused.[Seclusion] in chinese translates to [Retreat] using machine translation.....................................................
Awesome. Quick but full start on world building. Main character isn't op but has to find a way to show what happened! Big plus is he does not pretend to be psychic
Till Chapter 20thank you for wasting my time. Tipp for everyone else: dont waste your time here and move on. There is really nothing to gane from this one.
J'apprécie énormément le contexte de l'histoire et le thème jamais vu ailleurs le héros est assez normal pour être fondamentalement coolDésolé pour l'anglais j'ai du mal
Not Recommended Novel.Typical 10th rate Chinese Novel.To Much Flexing and Show Off plus hypocrit act...boring...and if this novel keep going, there will be no development, probably will be Dropped before 100 chapter.if still continue, there will be no reader..
it's absolutely awesome. hope it gets picked.
Great story but some times I get confused about who is talking but other wise I look forward to seeing more updates and more distinct markings for pov changes