I don't think it is a copy of the old one. This reads like a reviewed and changed version. Like the next step in refining a book before release.MC is just as stupid as before. If the system can plan elaborately and even plan years ahead to heal MCs finance, then the system can plan more than 24 hours ahead to ensure MC accomplishes his goals with as little obstruction as possible.Trouble is MC just doesn't ask the right questions and every problem is solved deux ex machina by the system. This means that every problem and trouble the MC encounters is because he doesn't ask the right questions.It is almost impossible to write a good story if at every turn the readers feal cheated because the only reason suspense happens in the book is the hand of the author.Even the most stupid person would have asked "How can I live happily with my wife while ensuring everyone who wronged us gets what they deserve? " after a few years. And the MC had enough time to ask every question imaginable in prison.Also, why didn't he just ask to be released earlier? Don't tell me the system can't get him a cellphone into prison. A single call was all he needed to get a pardon. This is how the American prison system works.He could have build an empire from prison, with scores of researchers trying to find a cure for his fiance.This story only works because the author keeps the MC stupid to the extreme.
The prologue of this immediately sucks one in into mystery, and hopefully, as the chapter count expands, that mystery is fulfilled.The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text.As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre.Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out.Good job, author!
'killed in a random school shooting'so our MC is an american... interesting ...........................................................................
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Loved this Story so far Does anyone know the RAW title for this novel??...........................................................................................
First 32 Chapters awesome start.I hope that it stays in this Quality and will not drag down Quality over quantity.I can just say that the book is great.Good Job.
MC's stupidity is so bothering I don't know how he is a successful businessman on earth. Maybe they shouldn't say that he is a successful businessman in the first place because of how stupid he is. I also skip chapters because his stupidity makes me uncomfortable. there are so many ways to make the story funny but not in stupid ways. once, twice stupid moves are alright but every chapter is like a "No, No" I'm in chapter 35 now I will update my review if there's an improvement.
The plot of the story is good but the only issue is the slow release of the translator. If they can release at least 14 chapters a week i’m willing to spend money even if they make this one premium.
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How dare this author to be racist?! Let's kill him for the glory of 'nationname'. I wonder why so much people hate racism in chinese novels (I mean, most people fine with racism in JP/EN novels) and in same time they enjoy movies such as Rambo. Btw this is not racism but a nationalism.
barely got through the first few chapters. I give up!I can't do this!if you ask me to describe why I can't.... I just can't! the story was no good for me. and I'm expecting the author will delete my review. though this is still a terrible read
I started reading this where there was already 1000 chapters. I have caught up to the point where I must WAIT for new chapters to be published and it truly makes me sad. I can't afford to get privilege chapters. I check for new chapters daily. This book is amazing. It is content of the highest quality.