This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This is the product of if you attempt to get me to put in writing an essay with a minimum word count, I go ahead and get a thesaurus from which I then purposefully handpick whichever words would further elongate my statement.sus/sus, beautifully amongus.
I start reading this because of the series truly shocking
So i have started this story, and i am not sure if i am willing to put in time to read it.
Mainly pointing towards the use of grammar and messy paragraphs all along since the get go.
All i can see tho from the reviews, it's super overrated, grammar is leaning towards machine translations, even if it is not. just to put a perspective on it.
Main character is quite a fresh thing, not what is usual for mc's to build on, i like the start of the story but. it's a major turn of with the grammar and how quick paced it is.
No offence to author.
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interesting concept but it might have been even more better to proof-read it before posting to see if you are getting the names and places accurate. for example - names - Captain Nakayamamoto - Capt.Yamamoto?; (MC)Zhang Yang - Publicity?; Garp - Karp/Kapu?; Kuzan - Green phaesant??; Sengoku - Warring States Period???; Steel Bones??; Places like Marine Ford - ma lin Fanduo/Marlene Vandor/Marin Vandou??
and when you say Liu Jian Ruo H0uo/Liu ren ruohuo - is this supposed to be ryujin Jakka???
Two generic Suggestions if you want to take them:
1) I would first recommend sticking to one form of addressing your own characters instead of making it in several varieties where the readers are kept guessing or analyzing to see if you are talking about what we think you are talking about.
2) Even better for readers if you can stick to the original name given to places, people and things for the fan-fic instead of experimenting with alternate names that change from chapter to chapter.
Looking forward to reading more fun chapters!!
writing quality . ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
story development . ⭐
character design . ⭐
update stability . ⭐
world background . ⭐
Now the review...~
Since the story is about Tycoon that got found out..... that he's the richest person after the reality show .
Now think about this : plot will end after the show ends, so
Author gonna drag the reality show through infinity...... doing anything & everything... otherwise story will end.
A single chapter plot is dragged through more than 20 ~ chapters as of now... & it will continue to be......
It's cliché, cringe, too much hypocrisy, nonsense, not funny, no action, idiotic mc.
A salute to those who will read it
Is there any romance ?
A 5 star review for the author.
The book has decent grammar, a good plot, good writing and most importantly the mc is overpowered with a God like skill.
I hope the story doesn't have any romance or harem though.
Keep up the good work and go on..
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I have read the first volume and what can I say? It was amazing, and I hope this one will be two.
The thing that I like about this second volume it is the fact that the action it is happening on a prison, where the MC is trying his best to survive this place.
I am glad that Rodriguez is back, but the thing who made me feel sad it is the fact that he is no longer the one from Ruby City. It is a different person and this would make this volume feel depressing.
زق /bad