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One of my most favorite books❤️ every single character from this book have its own story to tell. when the first time i start to read this book, i instantly fall in love with it❤️❤️
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First of all it seems interesting
I've not read it yet tho just skimming the first few chapters
I think the grammar,spelling,or whatnot need to be edited idk english is not my first language but I can tell if it's comfortable to read or not
Lastly, author what's the MC alignment?
good, neutral, evil?
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Very interesting novel that hooks the reader. Very good charactrr development and from what I read ot has great potential. I will definitely be back to binje read it good job jordi
What you have so far is good! The plot is interesting. Love the way you started off with your story.
There's a few punctuation mistakes and grammatical errors but your story is still understandable. Keep up the good work!
While I'd like to give it 4 stars, unfortunately, I can't do things like 4.5 or 3.5. So things that are a bit above 4 stars are averaged down to just 4, and things that are only a little bit below 4 are stuck all the way down at 3.Writing Quality: The actual writing only has minor grammatical errors and very few mistakes, overall sitting at a much higher standard than what is typically found on the website. Though that's not to say it doesn't have an excessive amount of repetitive word choices, strange sentence construction, and unnatural dialogue. Things that simply don't make much sense are often stated as well. The author also tends to over-use exposition, especially through character dialogue that has no sensible context for being said. The author tends to over-repeat details, such as how strong or rare guardians are, through the use of characters that are all already completely aware of this, though I will more than admit my own work has this flaw as well. I will note they have exceptional use of unique wording. Many people still like the writing, so don't let my review deter you.Stability of Updates: Pretty good, the fact that someone asked if the author was okay in a review due to a mere 3-day gap in releases should tell you a lot.Story Development: Meh, it develops as expected, there are plenty of tired cliches and obvious set-ups/outcomes. It's not bad, I want to make that clear, just nothing too special. Enough background information is explained (if not overly, and forcibly, explained at times) to make most of the writing choices seem logical. The pacing is fairly good as well, taking time to set up characters and setting before diving into the meat of the story.Character Design: Pretty good, the amount of random expository dumps characters give in almost completely unrelated sentences can throw off their believability, and a lot of their dialogue is clunky or weirdly constructed. A lot of their motivations and decisions are explained well enough to make sense, and they don't often behave in unbelievable or overly stupid ways for the sake of the plot. The main thing making them feel like characters rather than people, is the sheer amount of seemingly forced, almost completely unnecessary exposition the author often has them spout through dialogue rather than utilizing a narrative third-person perspective. There are also a lot of 'fake smart' moments in this book, where characters (typically the protagonist) suddenly gain insight into something with no actual setup that would even remotely lead them to the conclusion they're portrayed as smart for reaching. For example; The characters are given time to look through a shop-like system in their menu and buy items before heading into the tutorial, and the MC somehow determines that they're doing this to test how they handle pressure, off of absolutely nothing but the fact they were allowed to buy items before heading into combat, and this is portrayed as a moment of the main character being extremely deductive and intelligent. It comes off as insincere.World Background: Again, my biggest issue here is that the author occasionally over-does the exposition. The world is fleshed out as much as it needs to be for the story and is handled fairly believably. Though a few aspects come off as illogical, such as the story noting 'governing' alongside technology, and etc improving due to people entering monoliths, when there really isn't any logical way this would happen, unless the monoliths are dropping books on governance from superior alien civilizations or the like.Overall worth a read, I know most people here don't have very stringent standards for writing quality, and this is certainly an above-average novel on the sight. So go nuts!
It Didnt rly catchcmy eye but it was kn okay novel to read but there were defenitly more that i liked than this one. That is only my opinion
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