God!!!..the errors are too much ..different name for one person..the plot is ok and the story is interesting but the author needs to work harder ..anyone reading this story would drop it after reading 2 chapters ..the errors are overwhelming.
nice one I just started reading it , it's good
72 chapters 7-1-23
I am really enjoying your book. I like the characters in this book although some chapters are very similar to other books, I don’t mind it because can really visualize the male, female and children characters. Keep up the good work.
How often are updates????
Grammar wasn't perfect and some sentences could've been better phrased, but damn! - the story was really touching. It was a great read to say the least.
I have been drawn in!!! What an amazing beginning for a brand new book. Captivating and engaging! Can’t wait for more! Do you have an update schedule for this book yet?
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A lot of the logic simply doesn't hold up. People with stats in the thousands, like this Rynford character, can be blocked early on, even though they possess a Tier 2 Evil God magic skill and around 2000 magic points. However, much later in the story, when Fran is about four times stronger and has maxed out her Tier 2 Sword Ability—the highest possible level (since the idiotic sword forgot it has an Overskill ability that can evolve maxed skills)—she gets wrecked by characters with lower stats and lower weapon mastery.
Either I'm missing something, or the author isn't consistent with their ability grading. The novel once stated that having a five-level difference in weapon mastery creates an insurmountable gap that even absurdly higher stats can't bridge (like with the super skeleton guy). Yet, Fran can't defeat someone with lower speed and lower whip arts, despite having a sword with 3700 attack power (though it's never explained how that number influences anything) and 120 skills tailored to the situation.
Take my review with a grain of salt.
Romance ✅
Romance Novel ❌
That novel is now dead now too XD I guess the author just started it to try to win a writing competition
The Innocence arc. What is it about? Is it relevant to the story? I won't read it if it is just a purposeless addition to make the story longer...