Very interesting novel. Good beginning story, solid character building, and nice interactions between characters. Can't wait to see how the story progresses. Keep up the good work, author!
Hey guys, author here. This is the first proper novel I have ever written. It basically contains all the moments that I would like to have in my ideal romance novel, done to the best of my literary abilities. Hope you enjoy it. Feel free to comment your thoughts.
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Petition to bring back "I Can See the Lines of Fortune"! A wonderful story to try, especially now that pocket hunting dimension is over. An all around interesting read! Please resume the translation of it! (Trying this as it worked for World of Deities)
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
The story is really good. The MC is an old monster that can't die who has already tried pretty much everything there is to do in life.
In an attempt to change his undying fate, he opens a store that gives other people the chance to explore his own memories and rewrite history. Reads kinda like a mystery where the customers try to puzzle out their way through the memory instead of brute forcing it like the MC. Who knows, maybe both parties may learn something.
I very much enjoy the world and the mystery of magic and the MC trying to figure out how it works, but I find myself frequently frustrated by the stupidity of the MC. Also his simping and beta willingness to always take a back seat is not my cup of tea. He falls in love with an NPC. what does this actually mean? it means he doesn't try in sparring matches. He lets her use magic and skills while he doesn't so this love is really him just allowing himself to get beat up and her enjoying beating him up. He never seems to try in matches, which is another reason why the tournament arc killed the novel for me. Tournament arcs are normally bad, but here he takes a back seat for buddies, avoids what he's best at in individual, and then doesn't even try in his matches cause he wants to know what dying feels like. He's just too pathetic to be likable to me. all his greatest moments are just different ways of hating himself and committing suicide for others he cares about more than himself. He's got issues. He even refuses to properly equip himself because he's too busy equipping everyone else because he's not as important as others.
From chapter 1 to like 100 this is a really amazing story but after that it goes down hill professional players who play for money make newbie mistakes mc and those near him repeat their same mistake that they made in say early chapters overall its a meh story it just feels like the author gave up at some point and decided to make characters lose brain cells for convenience sake and plot it’s annoying and i mean to the point of i feel frustrated irl
I don't understand why there are so many comments about the main character accepting the affection from the loli. It isn't pedophilia since there is no sexual attraction between them. Neither are they going to marry anytime soon. It is only an exchange in betrothal gifts to confirm their marriage in the future. Plus, it isn't even confirmed that the main character would follow through since he is just placating the loli right now. After all he can't just reject her cold heartedly, she is the close childhood friend he grew up with when he was young.
Unfortunately I've read this recently in mtl and caught up to the latest chapter. I highly recommend it. Has great clan building and many wonderful characters
Wait hold up, Isnt this the same thing as the Tribe online from the last trial read? I swear the trial reads are just degrading to the point of no return (not like thats news to anyone). Ill keep the 5-star review if this novel aint a copy paste of the Tribe online and is fun and orginal with just a similar synopsis.
need lots of update on this novel
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