The writing quality is good just as the author said in their plot description. To be honest its better to start the story after reading the storyline coz u gonna be confused like me xd but now i get it after feading it.Anyone who enjoys videa game story gonna read it✨MuSt rEaD
I can't believe there are so many bad reviews that you guys made this rated as (3.1). My real rating would be a 4.5 but I will make a 5.0 to try to balance the rating. The story is very cool and I can't wait to see what happens next. The story went a little too fast for a story and could use some filler but overall I love it!
this will be sooooooooo gooood when i get to read it
In all honesty the 1st chapter was a little rough and very simple, but as each chapter goes on you can tell the author begins to improve; The characters become a little more developed and the world that the Author is crafting begins to grow a little bigger. Their story begins to develop and start to take form with each chapter that's made and it's easily to tell that they are learning and improving.It's a great little story that has room to grow and continues to do so.You may have to wait a bit but it's worth the wait.
Nice story. I like it very much. Please, let us know your updating stability so we know when to read it. And please can you let us know about which writing background you are using so that we can relate with the story.Moreover we don't know much about the main character. So I think you should give us a brief history sometime about the character and his background.
So after reading the entire story (995 chapters) here are my thoughtsthe story is barely "ok"its fighting scenes are pathetic and feels like turn base games instead of a real fight.MC at some point has so many xxxxxxxxx% more damage and yyyyyyyyy% weak stats for monster that its a wonder why the hell the mobs are still standing in his presence. its really stupid.the RL part of the story is ok.I have to say...the story could had been ok if the fighting scenes were interesting but are pathetic. you can skip them most of the time and go for the ending.most of the quest are done but in a very rush way at the end of the story. so again way too lame. at least it has an ending.the story is similar to sword god and legendary guardian but i'll put this below both.P.S.: its a miracle that those guys still have the chapters even though they died so many times and those were suppose to drop on dead 100% chance
I just found this story tonight, and the first few chapters were such a Turn OFF. THE TUTORIAL TAUGHT NOTHING, JUST PISSED ME OFF.SHOULD CHANGE THE NAME OF THE STORY TO ONLINE DUNGEONMASTER, which would be more inline with the actual story, not this DECEPTIVE NAME IT HAS NOW.
It start slow but get interesting as the story continue you will get sick at ch40 but wait till ch56 and you will be happy for not giving up There is no Romance scene till now which i think the author put any thing to attract readers. But thinking of the development being slow it will take time around ch 140 i think?!.
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I'm enjoying this book very much. It's fast pace, funny and face smacking! The concept is original, character development is good and I'm looking forward to reading more.Please pick up this book!
starts of good, then after about 80 chapters author forces drama and tries to make mc look resolute and cool....sadly it comes over as incredibly childish and bratty, really out of character and annoying, all at the same time.killed the story for me.
It said Wine Store??? Now MC has started to do the Cooking and Refining Pills also?? That's completely different from what it initially started from.