As per my nature, I can be very difficult when choosing storylines. To say the least, this novel was impressive. After reading a only short piece, I realized it holds a great depth of mystery which gave a thrill of suspense. My impression of the characters were detailed and descriptive. Would you please consider proceeding with this amazing novel!!!
I very much enjoy this story and would like to rate it higher. My only problem with it is that chapter 124 and up are copies of previous chapters with the title name changed.
I love this novel. I have read it over 20 times already and I love it more each time.
One of the things that make a good story is the character. And this novel has it. The interaction between the characters almost seems realistic--the author uses many interesting words to describe each of the dialogue. For the story development, it was slow pace in the early chaps but after that it'd pick up. Adventure and thrills wouls start to move around. With a beautifully crafted English languague and creativity, I would recommend you to read this.For the author, keep on writing. Story must be told.
Once again, another "I got a super op beast right from the start"MCs name has been changed to Mike, since WN has been changing tons of trial read names to western-ish names. For that I give it a low translation rating.Story development is that he gets maxed out charisma that only works on beasts. That's it. It was satisfying to read about John being eaten alive by bugs, but that's it.MC is a poor boy with a poor family, and he needs to carry them. Sounds exactly like that other novel that was on trial reads a few weeks ago where the MC was named "Link". Even the starting is pretty similar.OP Beast checkpoor family checkimmediate beast tide to show off beast, check.There's nothing that particularly stands out, the MC is a bit dumb, I would think that after a failed attempt at asking a girl on a date would make me question the charisma stat. If anything, if this world is filled with beasts, has he never approached a beast to see if his charisma worked? It only worked when he was choosing a pet? How does that work? How did that dragon sense him from who knows how far away and was attracted to him. Was none of the beasts in the city attracted to him? Big plot hole.
Here is a recipe I encountered last week, it was delicious. 3 cups chicken or San bei ji (i think ?) Ingredients1 kilo of chicken (you can use drumets or the legs and wings or white meat whichever you prefer)1cup Chinese cooking wine1 cup light soy sauce1tbsp dark soy sauce (optional its just for color)1 cup sesame oil25 cloves of garlic (minced)2 cups of Thai basil2 green chili pepper or dried chili pepper( optional if you want it to be spicy)10 thin slices of ginger1 cup of scallions( optional)3 tbsp sugar EquipmentSpatula Wok or whatever you deep bottomed pan you have that will fit everything and has a lid or can be coveredInstructions1. In a bowl mix your soy sauce, and sugar2. Heat the sesame oil in the wok, be careful because sesame oil has low heat tolerance, once you hear the oil bubble throw in your garlic chili peppers and ginger then stir. Once the oil becomes aromatic put in your chicken and stir until the chicken turns white.3. Once the chicken turns white put in the soy sauce sugar and wine mixture into the wok. Then let simmer on low heat without a lid for 30 or 40 minutes or until the sauce thickens and has a syrupy consistency.4. Once the sauce thickens, bring the heat up to high and throw in the scallions and basil leaves, stir then cover for 2 to 3 minutes to infuse the scent of basil and the scallions into the dish. Then serve!!! This is best served with rice and boiled eggs! Enjoy!!
The writing quality is really bad and the author really needs a proofreader or at least use some software like grammarly if they want to take money for this. Especially since chapter cost 11 coins which is more than most properly proofread books on this site.The story in itself is quite good though and keeps one engaged with the novel despite the bad writing quality and occasional copy pasted word definition from Merriam Webster or Wikipedia that the author tries to pass of as the characters having deep insight into some topics or something.This book is clearly just a hobby and if it was free It would deserve a 5/10. but since it isn't (and on top of that it's quite expensive) I would give it a 3/10.
Very interesting premise. And I like the writing so far. Keep up the good work! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I have read a lot of MMORPG novel, and this one is good enough to be included to the library.The writing style is a bit confusing as he mixed 3rd and 1st POV, so that's a minus one star.However, the plot is interesting so you should give this one a try
Really great novel. it's hard to come by this type work. Author you should keep writing. I wish web novel promote new authors a little. But, I believe readers will find it and move it upwards. To Author: please post at least 1 chapter a week or people will think it's inactive.
Great start to a good novel. please pick and update ????????????????????????????????????????????
its a really good book so far i like the story line and i could go hours reading this! keep making chapters!! even another book if you have to! i wanna see what happens next!