I must say I only read 11 chapters bevore I am dropping it. So everyone can and should judge for themselves.Now to the review Overall it is nothing new the mc gets reincarnated as a npc in a game and was very powerful in his last life Inside the game. It also strongly capitalises on this so that it is mentioned nearly each chapter at the very least once. The mc has some pretty strong plotarmor, zb. he gets Upgrade Materials for no reason from his enemy or finds a dead horse 2 meters outside of town which he can use as a mount. There is also no real basic worldbuilding so we know that he is in a town and that there are some unknown Organisations and Towns. we also don't know anything much about classes or euipmentqualities usw. Overall it is about 1-2 Stars for me the 2.6 Stars in the review are vor update stability that csnt comment in.
meh ?...................................... just another boring novel with a dumb mc ......................................................
i will recommend author to do effort as WSA contest days are going down . do not lose hope and work hard. best of luck.
Thanks guys.I'm grateful, I'll do my best to improve.
Writing Quality five star Stability of Updates five star Story Development five star Character Design five star World Background five star .
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The guy is basically a drone with only surgery and food on his mind which is not realistic. He is a young guy with hormones and hot women around him and he is not oblivious yet the author basically makes him a robot for surgery with no feelings or hrmones. It is a good novel but author should make the character more like a young health guy and not an emotionless surgery robot with nothing else on his mind. Hell, even the worst nerds are not like that.
I started to read this novel hoping to enjoy it but to my greatest surprise it was a let down its so boring I would rather read another book than this book
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Seems interesting enough but it seriously needs an editor to help correct all the run-on sentences. The main character so far seems pretty dim witted as he wanders around like a tourist. Hopefully it will improve with time but who knows.
It Is a good book with good character foundation and a good storyline. The writing quality is also very good and is great for people who like Slenderman, creepypasta or horror.