I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
This is good story, but it is little bit too fast paced for me. I think the game introduction fell short, since the start was just too fast paced that in my opinion skipped a lot stuff, so early info dumps could have been avoided, by making MC do more ingame stuff which would have let us find out about the world with the eyes of MC, otherwise good story and I like the writing quality, but slow down the pace and it will be even better one.
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OP MC(future) - ✅
Good drama- ✅
Harem(don't know about love interest but) - ✅
Good setup and background- ✅
character development- ✅
WHAT ELSE DO YOU WANT? JUST READ IT!
I like the story, I like the characters, i like the plot,i l like this concept. But i hate one thing. Writing quality, it is more worse than a mtl. So bad translation...
I really love Your Story and the way you write ✍️ .
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Suitable for anyone who like overdrawn nonsense drama especially between MC and girls. I read till chapter 150 on pirate website, all i can say is this novel is will make u very frustrated, suffer and angry. I dont feel the joy of reading this sh**. Legitly, i got high blood pressure from reading this.
PLEASE END THE STUPID DRAMA KEEP IT WITHIN LESS THAN 100 CHP AT MOST.[img=faceslap]
Just love it
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My first vampire story!!! I must confess, this story is WOW. Thanks author for sharing. I must do the same. I hope to see more chapters of this story.