This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top.
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I'll start off by saying that I only read 5 of the 40 chapters. So take this review with a grain of salt. For all I know, this becomes a good story later on.
The premise is what drove me to read this in the first place. But the constant mentioning of his double degree, the cliches (specifically the needlessly antagonistic characters, the stone ring, etc), and the part saying how the thunder damaged the TVs, phones, and routers tilted me. The last one could've been a translation issue and not an issue on the author's part (which some will say is me being nitpicky, but translation issues spell disaster for anything translated and if it was the author's mistake then I run the risk of being annoyed later on). Not to mention the two reviews I read from R00ks and Reading_immortal. But all of those things were enough for me to drop it at this point in time.
Maybe I'm being overly critical due to the last few stories I reread being great (Throne of Magical Arcana and Lord of the Mysteries). Don't get me wrong though, this story will appeal to some people and might actually be a good casual read. But I don't have enough time in the day to read stories that I have a good likelihood to drop in the future.
If anyone wants my rationale on my 3 star rating. It's not bad enough to be a 1 (a writing abomination), not great enough to be a 5 (a writing masterpiece). It doesn't compare to stories I would personally rate a 4. And the premise alone gives it another star in my opinion, hence a 3.
Read this if u want something new..in this novel many things is old which we read in other video games novel but it has my new things also... overall good.much better then other trail video games novel.
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it's a real good story the only problem I have with it is that I wish. chapters would be released faster it's got a rather slow update speed only about four or five chapters this year
Such a captivating start to the story. Definitely an interesting read, the writing quality is marvellous. It contains the perfect balance of dialogue and narration. I believe a lot of people would really enjoy it. I hope it get more notice! Good work author, keep it up!
The usual, 3* for World Building and Update Stability since it's new. To sum it up, it's Supernatural + Gantz = this novel; certain people becomes players in a Supernatural type setting. The concept is very intriguing if you're into the horror type genre that dabbles into mmorpg game mechanics. The MC, in my opinion, is someone you either love or hate. I'll give you 4 examples of what kind of character he is; Dr. House, Everett Backstrom, and Sherlock from both versions which are BBC's Sherlock and Elementary. A very intelligent a*shole. In the beginning I was put off because of the MC's character. If you can grind and get past that and somehow reach the end (which is currently chapter 60), then the story seriously opens up. Granted his attitude still ticks me off, but the story is good enough to maybe carry the entire novel, maybe. The story is about an event that happens on Earth which allows certain people to become players in a game that involves ghosts, mysticism, the undead and other supernatural phenomenon. So far, the goal is to find, accept and complete missions that deals with the unknown, level up and repeat the process.No spoilers so the only thing I can say is that there is a twist. Verdict: 50/50 depending on your mood and preference.
2 Votes from me I hope you win the contest. Overall the story is developing quite nicely. I like the flow and vibe. [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
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