A Great Piece of Art. What else do you expect me to say? Especially, the writing is too beautiful, I mean I wanna drown in it. I really wish to write a fragment of your vocabularies style writing. I really love it.
This book has the most exposition I’ve ever seen in a story before. So, so much spoon-fed information that we didn’t need, along with strange naming of characters and countries and completely unrealistic behavior of people and society. Might be the world world building I’ve ever witnessed. I had high hopes.
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Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
I liked a lot of story and plot, the story is very good, I liked it a lot, I laughed a lot until I couldn't take it anymore, very interesting and amazing protagonist, I highly recommend
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Gonna be honest, it is a meh type of story. It's "transmigrated" into Saitama with his powers so it is obviously that you should't expect anything serious from it. But, it stays strict to the true plot with little to no change which makes me question why even am I reading this. Sure, he gets power ups but... what is the point? He is already overpowered with Saitamas power. If it was "I transmigrated into saitama, don't have his power but obtain a overpower ability after doing quest" type of story it would be much better because then the plot would at least change a little bit more. My Fubuki ship went down the drain when you turned her into a transmigrator too. The grammar is average in my opinion too. Lines are striaght to the point, we lack some descriptions on some people or actions but overall it is way better than some chinese garbage. 3/5 seems like a good vote. For people who are bored and want to read something chill.
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Very good concept. Cant wait to see the future of this novel. The concept of the main character having spent thousands of in-game years slaughtering the other players would be a good back drop for making him not be phased by killing as well as making him a patient butcher. W W W I hope to see where you take this novel and i hope it succeeds
It’s a great novel, interesting idea, good story background, better then average character descriptions and great writing quality the only complaint is that there so much more chapters on p-a-t-r-e-o-n then here and I’m broke but besides that it’s a great story so far, I hope it will continue to be great.
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