This novel is just wonderful. As in a pure master piece.I am always eager and waiting for the next chapter because it just brings a sense of joy and happiness.Once again a pure master piece ??.
I only read up to chapter 11.In my opinion this novel have potential, not bad.But i don't like the story because author use 3rd person perspective, just try to count how many times author write "Evan" in a single chapter, personally i don't feel connected to the story because of this.Also i feel like author need to use more punctuation, i notice author rarely use coma (,) sign on his story which made the paragraf feel chaotic.I also don't like how author do chapter 1, the sacrifice part on chapter 1 is unnecessary for me, and its better if you put it in chapter 10.In my opinion you made chapter 2 to chapter 9 as a flashback is a bad choice.I mean why would you give readers an 8 chapter long flashback right from the start? its unnecessary, everyone can literally read chapter 1 and jump to chapter 10 immediately and can still understand the story.Its a bad start in my opinion.You should know that you need to make the story as interesting as possible on early chapter to make people stay and hyped for the next chapters, but here i am dropping on chapter 11 before even i know mc new power after the sacrifice.I hope my review can help you to get better.good luck author.
Strongest nova; Path of VengeanceStrongest Supernova, Path of Vengeance drew me in right from the start. It’s a well-written story with carefully crafted characters and tons of potential. The world-building and character development were handled exceptionally, making it easy to get invested. However, the experience was mixed for me due to some setbacks. The author’s updates were slow and infrequent, which made it hard to stay fully engaged over time.Unfortunately, the story’s ending felt rushed, which was disappointing given the strong foundation. It felt like the story had so much promise that wasn’t fully realized. Despite all the potential, the conclusion didn’t quite live up to what the book could have been. Overall, it’s a mixed experience: great characters and writing, but a letdown in pacing and final execution.
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Read a few chapters and i think it was cool.The part where he started running around with kids with his willy dangling together with the annoying cat threw me off.At least i enjoyed the first chapters a lot,i might come back depending on how the mc develops.thanks for the good read.
imagination, because their life is only
When vandals approached the counter and began charging the low rank spells, my senior friend summon five lightning arrows and shot them at the enemy. The robbers were immobilized and I helped to throw the bodies out of the store. They were poor guys who never touched magic, but because of world crisis they were poor and forced to make money in dirty ways. But of course for me, former magic student with daddy notes and extreme expensive magic spells and one of the former royal, magic soldiers that was nothing. I did goodbye my friend and went home.
Subhash Chandra Bose in Britain for ICS and return to India
The sound of clinking silverware could be heard throughout the inside of the Barton homestead, the entirety of the Avengers loitered throughout the kitchen, dining and living room.
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Lori was frightened to death. She couldn't comprehend the words that the man was saying. In a panicked state, she tried to move to get away from the man.