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I need more, why you just release2 chapter in one week, why, i need more we need more . And Why we need one hundred forty to just write review
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I dont know if i should continue reading or not... the content is a little savage.. i think if i continue reading it my sin well go bigger... huhu... but this is really fun... its not boring at all... god forgave me...
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
So incredibly repetitive. All the girls are in love with the protag, all in the same way. Maybe it's just because it's too early, and you can very well say that, but I don't care.I would honestly prefer if it was something like a tragedy/psychological novel, where protag is alone in the world with no one on his side. It would be edgy and emo(probably), but I would still prefer that over this. Too bad such a novel doesn't seem to exist.So if you're looking for a casual, borderline brainless read, then this is for you.The grammers nice though. I haven't noticed any odd sentences at all. That's all you really need to know. The rest of this review was written by me for my own amusement. Read it if you want, but it's not good/helpful or polished.Short summary, basically protag had to act as a villain in a novel cuz a system wanted him to. However after dying he has to do it again for some reason. Here's the catch though, basically every single character thats female with a name fell in love with protag and got reincarnated.That's not even a joke. Every single female with a name. And the reasons they fell in love with protag aren't even that good either. Things how they've been watching him for years and fell in love. Don't get me wrong, if it's once or twice then it can absolutely be creative. When it's like 10 or whatever amount of heroines this stories going to have though, it just comes across as lazy.Who am I kidding. It's probably going to be like 1000 different heroines.Anyway, so they love protag. Not like a light crush or anything, but basically a yandere type thing. I'm not against yanderes at all, in some cases they're actually pretty nice, but it's kind of ridiculous here. Not sure why but they just irk me. Maybe it's because they're all the same in terms of how they love him. They hate the original mc of the novel(in fact they all conspired to kill him in their past life. One lady even sacrificed millions of lives to do it or something. That's just douchy. Like seriously. I'm going to go off on tangent so skip if you don't care. It reminds me of this other novel where the protag is a spy or something but he gets betrayed. He has a final card up his sleeve though, and that's to literally blow up bombs he's set everywhere. It doesn't even make sense. Like nuke level. Like demolish the entire world, killing billions in seconds. Why? To get back at like three people. It's so annoying. It's so lazy. The protag doesn't even feel regret as he floats in a sea of souls, murdered by him. Leaving aside how unrealistic it is, it's just so douchy. God that made me so mad. Honestly I've got a incredibly filthy mouth in terms of swearing, or at least used to(league of legends level), but I can't even use it. God.), and blindly love the protag.It's very noticable as well, at least to the protag. But just one word from the system and he lets it go.I don't feel like doing this review anymore, so peace.
I gave 5 stars because never seen a system like this before at least.Name raw: 支付九十九元:为你缔造神秘葬礼Author: 火锅加香菜 Lv.3Status: Ongoing
it's pretty good , would love more stories like this and it's been a month and still no update . can anyone recommend me some goods books like this .
Honestly the only complaint I have is Haruko and her Harem of girls to me its still NTR even if its girls, but other then that this is an amazing novel.
I really like this story ? Even though it's fairly written, I'm still attached to it knowing that it's kinda like a gender bender genre ? I wish the Author would update more 'cause I reaaaally want to know what will happen next ? All the best to the authpr and goodluck ?
wow.. amazing story. good job author.
Good story!
