Too much nationalism after 100 chapters and becoming trashy with as you keep reading. By the chapter 160-170 I had to drop it..................................
Really good so far! I’m looking forward to more, good job :)
You are not smart enough to read this!If you take machine translation to the extreme opposite side, this is what you would get. What I'm saying is that rather than too little English, there is far too much! You'll need a dictionary or thesaurus handy for the large words and transliteration. Be ready to experience "the abortion of a rainbow
What is this flustercluck ? Is qidan messing with us ?
It's not the April fools day , so it most likely is not a prank ?
Is a new translator picking it up ??
Give some info before recommendation
I have been following GD_Cruz since his first novel: The Foolhardies.
That one was really good so I know this one will be good too. With only 1 chapter, I am already liking the ML. He is relatable to me as we all want to chase our dreams and not die. Right.
Morgana is interesting too but why is she just a girl while ML is already a man. No romance? Excited to find out.
Thanks for this author. I am happy to read more!!!
Starting is great but after that chapters size started to get small and in last few chapters author is doing lot of forced plots which has changed the story and made the MC a big idiot..
Well it's been 9 months and I hope that the author decides to continue this work... I thought chapters 3,4,5 were straight up hardcover publisher quality quality... Some of the latter chapters get a bit wordy in a way that does not develop, enrich, or further the plot or characters but more a word count extension... THAT being said, the writing quality of this story is easily near the top of WebNovel... ... Another reviewer made a great point, "An interesting take on a game world and its mechanics. The 'balanced fortunes' system (for lack of a better name) that the world has is a surprising new take on how a game may be designed, at least in my reading/playing experience." ... ... The work feels like it has some of the flavor of "Ready Player One", "Android's Dream by Scalzi," and a little bit of "The World Online" (among others) ... Overall this novel has gotten me intrigued and I look forward to watching it grow. ... ... ... THOUGH, as a final nugget of a request, I hope the author will not ignore his MC's real body life while pursuing his VRMMORG relife... a 1/3 non-gaming life reboot to 2/3 gaming life reboot feels pretty correct. ... ... ... Good job author.. please return.
Absolutely love it! I can't explain why I love it without spoiling, but this is a definite should read!
The world background is laid out perfectly without interrupting the flow of the story, the development of the story is excellent, and the writing quality is wonderful. I love the main character, and it's not even that far into the story yet!
This novel is easy to read and has a fascinating plot!
I felt like I've read this novel before...must be my imagination.
this book starts with a suspenseful plot, the timelines differ, but the MMORPG genre is the same as that every novel... waiting for regular update...
Me: "Not a shameless review this time, after all, I am a decent man!"Some readers: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one? Again five stars."Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call thisconfidence!"Some readers: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk in the web novel."Me: "You guys are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*."Some readers: "With your writing skill, that is just like that. Tsk"Me: "Hey, Why didn't you read more than 15 chapters? My talents improved afterward."Some good readers: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try."Me: "*sob*sob*You guys are so kind."Some good readers: "So, what's the storyline?"Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his Al( System). Finding the truth about his mysterious dream(A.K.A previous life) and changing his shitty destiny. Furthermore, there is a cold antagonist and OP loyal brother. Tsk *No spoiler*."So overall, please read this novel up to 15 chapters before thinking about dropping:)(:Definitely, you guys will love the story afterward.
I will just say I like the concept of after the MC is done using the system, it just a bit funny that he decided to become a father after becoming a terrifying assassin.