This is a unusually story but it gets more additive as you read more you wants more as if you are one with the they story can't wait for more
i like it continue doing greit job :)
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The story is very well thought out and stable the character design is is one of the best i have seen..... the world background is great and i really like the small details you throw in there at times, i would have gave it a complete 5 stars if there wasnt a few misspellings but those aren't really a big deal (seeing how i probably misspelled a few thing while writing this) to me, other than that its agreat story!
This is an absolute surprise. The story already reached 3.7K views! I am definitely overwhelmed with all your support. Keep it up! Thank you!
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i liked it allot
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All in all a generic chinese modern fantasy.
Everyone thinks the MC is trash but secretly he isn't
All the mobs are idiots who don't have anything else to do but try to make trouble for MC 'cause they think they are better than him
All the beauties want to be with MC just 'cause he's the protagonist
Would be an okay read to pass time if the author would get someone to fix all the stentences that have words in wrong places
*clears throat*......Dope.......
(This statement was made on Chpt. 53)
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If you like reincarnation stories and system stories with a good strong lead this should be a good story for you.LOVE THE STORY LA LA LA LA LA LA
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although i liked pocket hunting Dimension, but this is not good the settings are all messed up as if the author hadn't come out of his previous work because lots of settings are similar to PHD novel and a bit of a game setting too considering that items actually dropped from monster's while humans corpse remain which was a turn off for me.
I have to say, this system is kinda funny sometimes, you can improve more than what you are doing. there are shorts chapters but I feel That you mean by doing so. Keep doing a good job my dear!