this story about a guy turning into devil (hero) scaming people or i say make theirs dreams come true in exchange for lifespan..anyways guys give this novel a shot we will see how this story develops..btw i still did not read a single chapter hhhhhhhhhh crazy right ..borderd people do weird suff..i hope this is a good story coz i already give 4 stars author.
complicated. after 40 chapters, I still didn’t fully understand the structure of the world and I hardly understand it, it coexists at all. And so it’s almost an ordinary Chinese young master hitting unbelieving faces ...
I liked everything about the story, it is pretty good with descriptions and definitely exciting, Kudos to the author. I am gonna read this till the end and wish to see more spicy content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️
Absolute perfection.
I really hate the 140 characters thing it’s suuuuuuuuuper annoying
I clicked this because it was on feature and piqued my intrest with over 100 free chapters and thought it would be bad or something but I was so wrong it’s honestly one of the best novels I have read on this app definitely top 10 and if there’s a mistake in the spelling or whatnot if you comment on it Anatha is quick to fix it and he/she seems like a nice person so I highly recommend not only is the world,character,and plot 10/10 but Anatha gives their best to make it great
The story is interesting, but you hit a paywall way too quickly for how low quality the spelling and grammar is, and for how short the chapters are.
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Deserve some praise for this one. It seems you did not sleep while writing like the other one. Big up! Continue working hard and with this one we will be taking all the votes for you.
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I read till chapter 72, and i think i can't go further . When i started reading this , i had high hopes. The reasons were :- The pretty good writing( nothing revolutionary but definitly better than most books out there.)- The many possibilities of developement for the plot - The fact that the transition from a cowardly character to a confident one for the Mc was well done.- Although this novel takes some elements of another( bloodline system, which is not so great either) , it slowly finds its own way.- The other voice of the system which added a layer of mystery .But that was all. And some point, as time goes by, one find himself/ herself unable to continue because some problems are too obvious to be ignored : - The pace is horribly slow.It is not a bad thing per se . However when NOTHING substential happens to the Mc , it just makes the book boring.- What is even the Mc 's motivation?So far i don't see one. Him not having any clear ambition makes it so he doesn't go beyond the " i'm an author's good idea " to become a " i'm an author's good idea who works because I FEEL REAL " . Harry is an Mc because the author made him so. If he was a side character in some other book , People wouldn’t even care about him , because he is not interesting.This applies to other characters as well. So far , none of them seems a little bit interesting or real.- The story doesn't progress and it feels like there are no dangers or difficulties for the Mc(A competition is approaching but there's no tension at all ). The world building isn't doing much better , as it is nothing new and we don't even know that much about the world yet.- The author's writing is also a problem.Although the grammar and the vocabulary are good( it's nothing extraordinary but it's better than most of the novels on this app), the author has a serious issue with emotions.The tension, the fear , the sadeness... it's like the author has troubles showing emotions. It is not so evident in the earlier chapters. But as one goes further , it is more and more glaring.That's why every interactions feels so inconsistent and not relatable at all.Besides , i myself do not like it when the Mc dwells on sadness and regrets. But the author could have shown at least that Harry( even though he said the contrary) deep down, cares for his family. It should have been shown( or told ) a bit that it hurts him that they didn’t even searched for him when he moved out . What i mean is that the author could have add some complexity to the characters' emotions which would help making them appear real and human-like.Moreover, the chapters aren't that long .72 chapters appears to be a lot but it isn't ( for that book).Overall, this novel isn't bad but just average . I'm so disappointed because so much more could have been done .
I really liked this book so far. i'm typically not a fan of historical stories, I honestly find them pretty boring- but this ones actually pretty good. keep it up! <3
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