HifellowDaopractitioners!If you are wondering if this novel is worth your time Iproudlysay thatit'sdefinitelyworth it, I read allchaptersup until350.It'sreally well righten and the character developmentmakessense.Unfortunately, I'mquitting it because Idon'thave the money to continue.If you are the author reading this, I would like to say that your work itsdefinitelyworth the top 10 of this app, the only thing it need to make it there is popularity.
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It was supposed to be a great story, but the MC is very dumb and does not enjoy what he has, and worse came from a modern age and he seems very *****, and to make matters worse he says a good person and decides very fast to take a life even though NEET was previously isolated by persecution (as a coward may have a life-long resolve). To make matters worse he will be targeted to be engaged to growers but stronger than himself, and even then he goes to a place that anyone could say goes the **** (anyone would ask the cultivation levels of the world and especially where is going, but he does not ...) the system seems to have a great knowledge of the world, but MC does not ask anything useful to him.He said he read a lot of novels, but he does not even know what dual cultivation is, and to pamper he was in a perfect place to stay strong, but what he does (he leaves the place to go to a dangerous place, especially for him, cultivation too high for their own age, even being 3 times more difficult to grow).My view of the MC * super idiotObservation> The novel has many cliches, and much repetition of phrases and information making it very repetitive.The initial idea of the novel is very good and needs a lot of revision and also a touch of realism, mainly psychological of the MC.
this novel has alot of potential like the persone behind the system or smth or the org in the world fighting for gate of babylon with help from another branches from another world while crating human hibrids with humans inside aswell and creating a power house empire or race in the univerice fighting against a diffrent dimention or so on .
Have you really looked past the first few chapters? the quality of translation drops more and more after the first few chapter. I am now at chapter 20 and it is putting me off to continue due the lack of the right translation. It feels like the translator does'nt check his work. I do hope it will become better. I will try to push through for now and keep reading
After hearing that the novel is late in entry in wpc 228 and seeing that it still won 2nd place that must be a proof of your good work author san. I'm only a few chapters in but keep up the good work mr noworryman.
Awesome. I can't describe in full how this story is. Because it's really good
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Awesome book. I couldn’t put it down.
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Absolutely brilliant, again! You can’t go wrong with any of this author’s books!