Its good novel
But still grammatical errors occurred often.
Mc personality is a downer.
i found it on scribble, but here have more chapter than there is there any different? and in there it have a good rating so i give you same too and change it accordingly after i read few chapter
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Really enjoying this book. Michael sticks to whay he says and i love the Ruthlessness. Really hoping this doesnt turn into a harem. Looking forward to more updates
Not bad, there were some typos, but not too much to detract from the story.
The development with the love interest (Liu Li) was smooth as heck, hopefully he stays loyal to her.
The MC's personal development was also good, even if the system was helping him alot, he still tries his best to do what he can at the moment.
read the title and then read the netorare tag, like how can these two things be true at the same time i don' t really understand, this author is a literal example of a cuckold. unless u are an aspiring cuck yourself dont bother reading this shit
The story is fairly interesting but is ruined for me by a few things. The first big thing is the fact that the system brainwashes the people he pairs with into liking him. Its strange and kreepy when it is shown. The next is that the mc is a bit of a kreep as well to me. The Translation is also poor and there are also gramatic errors littered in. Lastly the way the novel describes and deals with cultivation is wierd and confusing.
Well written and consistent MC (Pretty much bootleg Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity). My only critic is that plot seems to be going too well for the MC. Would like to see him struggle a bit more in order to achieve his goals (Eternal Life).
I hope this gets picked
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Loving It . Hope it will have a great future
This story is starting off normal and ok.
The plot seems easy to understand right now. The characters all seem to have unique designs And as of right now the world in this story is getting slowly built I think.
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