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The story is interesting but it’s not my kind of story. All the best author ??
First impression review!FL is very mature for her age (as expected in the synopsis.) She's very aware of her surroundings and isn't one to pounce or act without careful thought.To see her figure out she transmigrated to the book was anti-climactic not just because a lot of books have this plot but also because she was perceptive enough about it, pushing aside questions she might have like how it happened in exchange for survival—especially when she her new character got poisoned. What's the use of lashing out when it could cause you your life? She also transmigrated to a timeline before the beginning of the novel she read so not everything is figured out for her. I expect to see her try to make it with blind eyes. Then, see how she'd do when she enters the main timeline of the story.Kudos to Sorahana, of course, my writing deity. I could only hope to be as good as you are. Hoping to be able to be here for this novel every step of the way. ?
Dropped. My review is pretty much the same as others. Author, sorry and I hope you're listening to them. ??Especially the part where author just summarizes the events. I sleepy reading just reading couple of line of those. This novel is a big no for me. I don't even care much if the mc is childish and illogical. Let us be immersed in the story and let us be in the same room as the mc as much as possible. Show, don't tell
Quite a good story so for keep it up Author I personally liked how fast you transitioned his poverty to somewhat rich as some authors that have money systems in their novel take to long to get out of the poverty stage with the MC always stressed out trying to make money in shameless ways.I also like how ironically he made way more money from the cashback system simply from caring about a friend he feels gratitude towards instead of the girl he got with specifically to make money which is quite funny and I don't know if you did it on purpose or not to foreshadow a realization the MC will have in the future but I liked it so kudos to you author :)
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Good read, good luck to the author!Release a new chapter soon, I wonder how Long Gia Hinh will defeat the demon king!The more I read, the more I was drawn into the story because I love the horror genre!
mc is strangely psychotic. The events are so beautiful. The novel is worth the time and you'll never regret it. Building the novel so far is pretty good. Personalities are special. But mc is a very strange character. I've never read a character like that before.
Interesting story and plot. Great job, The main character is great . Especially the trials he is going through , from start to this point . We all have trials, hopefully improve from them, but rarely do I see benefits soon after. It is great to think of rapid benefits . Lead character is helpful and sacrificing , with standards that are refreshing.
This really was one of the best stories in this genre till it was updated. I don't know what is going on in the author's life -- maybe he graduated and landed a full-time job, so it's hard to write for him. Maybe he's recovering from that surgery he had, or maybe he really is pregnant like some of his readers claimed (lol!) -- but I really wished to have seen this story's ending.On that note, I want to thank you, author.Night_Crawler619, you have inspired me to write my own novel. I will write a similar story to this and try to give it an ending.I was depressed when I started reading novels.I read your story and some of the other ongoing WNs Shadow Slave, Void Evolution System, Inheritor of Magic, etc.I also began reading some traditional works like the Stormlight Archive, Six of Crows, and The Name of The Wind.All these stories really helped me through my tough time. But among these, only one didn't get the conclusion it deserved -- yours.So, I will write a story as a tribute to this beautiful work.I know I Will Kill The Author wasn't some masterpiece, but it holds a special place in my heart because it was one of the first stories that made me laugh when all I wanted was to cry.I really liked Lucas' humor and his foreshadowed and hinted tragic past. I really wanted to know more about him.But, oh well.Thank you for what it was worth.
I think that this is well written and it is a shame the author is stuggling with motivation to write this is one of my favorite lightnovels.
It's my story and I love it ?❤ But in all honesty I'm so sad I have such a short time to finish this story. If I had more time I would feel at ease but I'm just grateful for the views this story is already receiving ??I hope going forward everyone will continue to enjoy it❤
This novel deals with totally different themes.This makes an exciting read. Whatever apparently appearantly is made into truths unraveled.This app is doing a magnificent service to the community of read readers and writers...
