highly recommended , don't miss to read this
I really want to like it. It has the necessary ingredients, but it falls flat because the chef doesn't know what to do with them.There are so many words in every chapter, but nothing of importance is being said.I read 16 chapters and I've found myself skimming through most of it, as it was mostly pointless nonsense.And when there's suddenly something interesting going on, the POV suddenly switches to some random dude and his sister, or some random dudes drinking and talking about something. Don't know what, I just skipped past the whole thing.I don't think I'll continue reading past the first 20 chapters, unfortunately. It's all a convoluted mess and nothing makes sense. Driving the reader mad with gibberish is a great way for your readers to immerse themselves in your novel, but it's not for me.
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I really really love your story and can't wait for because it was amazing and beautiful really ♥️ it and can't wait for your next update please update more if you have a chance???????????????
Hello and an honest review from me. When I read your story, so far it has good writing but the paragraphs were too long so I might suggest if you could try to break it. Other than that, good job author??
a five star All the way great story?pity you locked on chapter five Author please open so we can read..…........................................☺️
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Great novel but I feel the plot development is too fast so pls can you slow it down a notch with a little more in depth development and also when he is giving out techniques and weapons (even though it means nothing to him) he shouldn’t give it out casually they should work for it so that they would know the value of it and also the romance is rushed what the hell is there meeting was by fate and then after that you like each other and she becomes your wife.... Generally the novel is great but the plot feels rushed and isn’t going in depth with the development, it would be a lot better if the author takes his time to build the plot and not rush them... also GET WELL SOON AUTHOR
Too bad, i would have liked if the novel continued, it was pretty fun when it lasted.----------------------------------------------------------------------------Says: Secret
I really came to love this .The mc is quite likeable too .This novel has great potential .Hope you continue this author. ####£¢€¥^°°[[[={}{°°={=€££|`~`π׶=^¥¢£|°
I am enjoying this novel thx to the author for writing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!