This book isn’t that interesting to me. Good writing but it’s bland plot. I mean lets be honest everything in this book is generic. He changed the names of mana to ora, but idk it reminded me of the demonic something. same book same style going on but that’s completed and free. I am not saying this book is bad just not unique. (Ps I read till chapter 30, so basically half the book.
I really enjoy the story, eagerly waiting for updates. Morderd fanfictions are rare so it is all the more fun because it is one of the really good ones.
usually I read more danmei novels than anything, but gurl, if you didn't get me hooked on this one. AMAZING, for real, y'all should read this asap, it deserves so much recognition omggg. I'll read her other novels cuz I need more of her writing lol. a solid 5? for me, because it got me addicted from the beginning. can't wait to the time skip so Natasha will be able to throw this Empire into pure chaos ?
Looks interesting so far, looking forward to future chapters. :)
This novel is wonderfully written and also very engaging. The story and plot are briefly explained by the author. The character development of our main character, Ace, is also well-executed. I would rate it 5 out of 5 for this novel.
i don't know what the editor saw in picking this one out of all others
but seeing the pathetic MC , his denial of reality , and the great DRAGON (lol those dog eating guys) city bragging got me so angry that i dropped this novel
the MC is a Wuss
cheat is super MEH
the whole country is on war (because they currently have to defend against monsters) but the idiots are suppressing each other [the great chinese story logic]
they brag so much about their country , techniques and man the exaggerated name they gave to CARDIO exercises
one is literally named DRAGON Sleeping
its a split with upper body fold
Very good
More more posts please
This is a good story. Though there are only few chapters so far, but these chapters are written so well. It's interesting. Hope it won't be like those novels who are only interesting and good at the start and became trash later on. I'll add this in my library. Looking forward for more❣️
This novel is a bit boring in the beginning but gets better and better of you keep reading. This novel too might have been selected for voting pool if it had been written in a dumb foolish manner with a load of nonsensical cliches (this $hitty webnovel site prefers that kind of novels).
If any one know its name in its native language or has a link for the raws please share it here
I'll be honest, but the first initial chapters were a bit of a struggle to read. Maybe because of the grammatical mistakes and misuse on tenses and adverbs. Not to add, I noticed that the author tends to be redundant too. And that made my eyes feel tired. (Imagine reading a paragraph that repeated the word "kill", "left", "walks" 5+ times) Although there was a slight improvement from chapter 13 onwards, I recommend that the author should be vigilant on proofreading and improving on your vocabulary to remedy that.
Lore-wise, I like how the author thought about how to make his "system" uniquely his by adding his own touch. I liked the way how he fashioned the quest part especially.
The Story & Characters though... is a bit lacklustre. Either that or the pacing was a bit off. Especially when it came to the MC's interaction with the opposite gender. I really saw him as a thirsty dude despite his dialogues were rational sometimes. Also the murdering parts and the implied pinning (well it is a harem) were a little awkward and robotic. I think using realistic references and putting genuine emotions would make those better.
Although I pity Kite for being thrown into the fray of the system but still, some parts on his character development may need work since I don't feel that attached to him. (or maybe because I got irked on some of his questionable actions)
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