Im genuinely convinced everyone who reviews and comments on these stories are bots. The world development is bad. The author throws at ranks, names and areas without telling us anything about what they mean and if he does the meanings he gives are things you could tell from a educated guess. " its big" "because they're evil and not righteous". I havent gotten far enough to see much character design vecause i stopped at chapter three. But even then it was so bad, it wasnt like they were people or characters, more like the authors inner concersation with himself, and i didnt even mention yet it seems like when the characters do speak its just them talking about how great their sect is. How great their cultivation is, etc. And thats not even the worst part. The grammar is horrendous. The first chapter wasnt bad but was annoying to read. The second chapter was worse but you could still read it. The third chapter however? Just in the first quarter i pointed out around 10+ errors. I gave up at that point bc i would never finish the chapter of i kept going. So im just going to end it here. I wrote this so someone else hopefully doesnt get tricked by the false reviews that say the story is amazing with nothing wrong with it. Knowing webnovel my review might be pushed down so no one sees it or even removed. But to those who do see and read it. If you can stand a horribly written story that seems to be a translation(not sure about it yet) then go for it. If your not, and your like me. You could check it out but i wouldnt reccomend it, unless by the time you read this the author gets a proof reader and someone to fix all the errors that plague the chapters.
It's a good novel .it doesn't seem like that at first as there are many dramatical mistakes and plot hole but it becomes better as you read.you should definitely give it a shot.
Translation Quality ... I LIKED IT.Stability of Updates ... I LIKED IT.Story Development ... I LIKED IT.Character Design ... I LIKED IT.World Background ... I LIKED IT.
I like the idea of selling high-tech weapons on to another world, but MC's issues with his parents, romance, systems with attitude, and getting involved with random shit and cultivation just bothered me the most. This would be great without involving cultivation and romance. Just pure selling weapons, developing weapons from muskets, flint locks to missiles, just pure destruction, killing, plotting, and no family shit or romance would be very great instead. Have you seen the War Dogs or Lord of War movies by nicolas cage? or even anime like jormungand and black lagoon anime? those would be great references for this novel.
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I like this book. Recomend it to everyone who likes novels ^^ Novels bring happiness. I don't know what really else to write... This novel have bright future. All the best.
Apart from cliques genre, the overall concept with a mixture of system based setup for mc, humourous/sarcastic jokes, and a non-childish mc. This is the most basic requirement I expect will be maintained throughout the novel. Well, not decreasing release rate and quality is also a much-needed factor. No humongous plotlines have been revealed at the start to make the future of mc grand but have also not made it too dull like starting from scratch with no support. Overall, if selected welcome to the family.
I don't like writing reviews because I always feel like I'm somewhat misleading people because my english isn't very good, but this book deserves the 5* so I don't care. I haven't laughed as much as I did when reading this book for a long time, it's monstrously hilarious. I'm not a fan of R-18 scenes, in general, but Ben is a fun enough character to make me actually enjoy them. He's the kind of character that makes me smile widely while making me feel like stomping him into paste if I ever get the chance.It's unfortunate I can't try the dating tips, even if just for the laughs, with me living in a religious country and all that jizz, but it has the smell of experience and I like authors that know what they're writing about.The release rate is also so fast it makes my broke ašs despair. Reading 3 chapters of this book had become my daily routine for a moment now, and I felt I could write this review now that I got far enough (A bit after the "wholesome" Katie chapters).I love this book, keep up the good work fellow dog-lover.
Truth to spill, after reading few hundreds of chapters I started to pity Chinese people now I understand why all of them are so afraid and hateful of others to be surrounded by such environment where they sneer each other and always sniffs at other people business and judges even if this is novel and not reallife but there is no smoke if there is no fire. That shows with all these Chinese cliche's where they bite each other with no thinking. After only reading this did I understood why Buddhism was created there like I say if there is no disease there is no need for cure and as China was rotting from within it gave birth to Buddhism without it I can't even imagine what kind of fate it would have. As for main character it feels like it's average only when it's needed that expert like deity mentality shows up and it looks like that author forgets about it, yes ı understand when it's around friends and family but when he adventure's it feels like character developed but sadly the only development is degradation.. If I knew about this I truly wouldn't had wasted my time on this. But at least this opened my eyes about Chinese abuses they live through.
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I was expecting a zombie fight but this novel has no zombies, and only puts zombies in chapter 1, you said apocalypse will be in chapter 60+ but you stopped updating this novel even before the apocalypse so I think this is disappointing.