• Shunpo martial arts 1x
As the villain flew down the hill of sand, Peter started to web him up, but the guy was actually strong enough to rip them apart.
John turned with a quizzical face, he would already ask when the voice of the world informed him.
the weights he had in his body had opened his skin with it staining his training clothes with the occasional blood that came out of the open wounds in his body.
"Fufufu, to think his pride would only reach this far. 'Lightning' is the only thing written." (Rose)
Alter used crimson regenerative flames on his hand, the injury successfully disappeared, the infection too
"I think that this should be a lot of fun. Let's see how much trouble we can cause."
Jeremiah let the flames feed until she was nothing but a charred remain.
I believe I did a decent job with this, but I should be careful not to be overly confident. Overall, I feel it's quite good. I would appreciate it if everyone could leave a comment after each chapter or at least occasionally, so I can understand your thoughts on my story.
The book is well written and how the story unfold is really worth the wait for the writer's upcoming chapters! I love the book and look forward to more chapters! So please write more and make it more captivating! Thanks!
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It's sad to see these novels, seeing their reviews, both good and bad, everything seemed lively and now... there's nothing left. And not only in this novel, many become abandoned works.