While there are some spelling and word errors here and there. This book is absolutely amazing and the power system is awesome. I really love this story.
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Writing quality : 2/5
Update stability: 4/5
Story development : 1/5
character design : 1/5
World background: 1/5
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One of the few good novels in this website.
I started reading this with no expectation at all, only because of the music genre. It did not help when the first few tens of chapter
are kind of bland and boring. Although due to that, the world building is done properly and consistently . The characters are also well made. At least, it is not carbon copy to other novels with hot-blooded genius, prodigy etc. Same goes with other side characters.
The story is going good all the way up to chapter 90+, and I suggest to read the novel up to this chapter to know wether it fits your taste or not.
What this novel lacks are excitement and fortuitous encounters(lol), though there might be in the future.
Good job so far with the writing! I think that you are off to a good start as an author and am absolutely looking forward to reading more of your releases!
-dff123
P.S. Let's be friends on discord ;)
Love the whole story so please don't drop this. Although i said i will wait patiently for the next update but please don't forget about this story. You left this at a big cliffhanger =(
Man, I had to drop this story.it wasn’t bad until like chapter 10-11 when the MC decides to drop all her secrets and then precedes to say she doesn’t want to tell them everything after she already did. Stoped after chapter 13 where I couldn’t handle it anymore. If it gets better afterwards great couldn’t get there though. Till then it was great, good plot, pretty good MC, and what seemed to be a good plot intro, but dumb MC accident ruined it.
The author is a master at description, making the readers feel and see the things happening in vivid details. If the updates were faster, the author stands a chance to become pretty famous.
The overall story was good up to 190 chapters but then it seemed like the MC just lost his freedom and accepted every military order, he should have just quit them. His mother is trying to totally control his life and is just getting into his business which i didn't like at all.
I'll keep it short, the author is either a troll or has nil experience in all the tags on this story. This story is logic-free and every single detail in it is worthy of a bucket of cringe.Mc character: idiotic. Game mechanics: wacky at best. World building: kindergarten-level imagination. Plot: Don't know. My braincells lost weight after reading though. Read at your own risk.I really wanted to like the story but i failed. I wish you good luck in that endeavor!
Saw this in recommendations, was quite surprised and had to click to make sure it was the same name, and indeed it was!I remember reading this story many years back in some other place when I had recently started getting much into reading stuff, and it ardently left a beautiful and sweet impression on my mind. Now that I have found the story again, I shall thank the author for creating it. I knew it was redrafted many times xd, seeing the author’s review confirmed my guess, hehe!
even though it looks completed it is not and he’s also still charging coins for something that is not completed and currently paused on production to do another book what are you could’ve just continued the bookies currently writing
can mc do anything else that cry ?if some thing bad happen it was fine at start but after every 50ch mc is crying .I rather have him become a killing machine than a broken character