Velstad
I really don't like it both Manhwa and Novel
This is Wuxia, cultivation is Xianxia.
I dont know it been a few months since the the last update
Ahh my first ever novel ?that I read and enjoyed. Because of you I am now a novel reader with lots of novel that i read.
Oh my, look who I found in the wild.
How are you doing, Catnips, my friend?
How many chapters of SS did you read?
Is this dropped ? It is a good story for me. Such jokes in an unexpected ways, always lively. Please update more
this is pretty good
do the gamers get to chose a different race later on?
Honestly one of the best reviews I've seen on here, you got me hooked.
What I'm curious about is, how could someone who merely posed a question be rewarded more favorably than the one who provided an answer? The concept of 'better reward' for a preparer seems illogical to me. Frankly, I find this fanfiction unappealing due to its premise. However, if you enjoy an主角无代价地变得极其强大,那么这部小说可能正合你的口味。
Hello, I'm the translator for this novel. Initially, I wrote a review some time ago, but unfortunately, my computer crashed, wiping out my work. Here's a revised version after reading through the main story and peeking at a few extras. My opinion on the novel has significantly changed. Initially, I found the first arc decent, but as time went on, my view of the story declined.
This novel shares similarities with "Paper Flower" in terms of its themes. There's a particular scene where the protagonist attempts suicide by jumping off a cliff, which might be a trigger for those who didn't enjoy that novel.
The main character is quite pitiful, portrayed as obedient, small, and weak. His frequent association with a milk-like scent raises concerns. The author seems to infantalize him for an endearing effect, which can border on creepy. Despite the time skip, he maintains a childlike demeanor, often justified by his past trauma. However, this becomes less endearing as it progresses. Most of his character revolves around being a victim.
The male lead is abusive and has a tragic backstory, but it doesn't justify his actions. He eventually undergoes some character development late in the story, but his forgiveness comes too easily. In the beginning, he subjects the protagonist to harsh treatment, exploiting their age gap and the protagonist's mental state. He confines him, forces tattoos, and tries to force a marriage alliance.
Side characters, though aware of the abuse, lack genuine efforts to help. For instance, when the protagonist's childhood friend rescues him, they ultimately succumb to the male lead's presence. Additionally, the novel's villains receive minimal consequences despite their extreme wickedness.
I also have issues with the secondary relationships. The doctor and the male lead's bodyguard had potential, but they don't get enough screen time. The second side couple involving the childhood friend and a later character feels forced, as the childhood friend ends up with a clone-like character who is even more pitiful.
Lastly, the pacing is problematic, with major plot points rushed or underdeveloped. Characters are introduced and dismissed abruptly, like disposable elements in the repetitive narrative. For example, the crown prince, initially portrayed as a significant antagonist, disappears quickly within a few chapters.
Overall, this novel is frustrating, especially for fans of the genre. It's not one I would recommend, especially for those sensitive to certain themes. The constant annoyance and frustration might make it suitable for a drinking game challenge, but I wouldn't encourage it.
It's just a fit, so we are useing it
How much long until this gets completed? I heard new chapters comes very slowly and i don't want to wait for them, would much rather wait until it gets finished.
