Book is amazing from the story to the MC and cant wait to see the full potential this story can bring.
I would definitely say this novel is something you should read.
The story was good from the start, the plot was not bad and the character and power of MC grew pretty nicely but the quality just dropped so hard after chapter 40 that I can't bear to read it anymore.
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So starting off, this is an amazing novel, one of the best I have read on here. The plot is great, I like the direction it is going and it has alot of potential and room for growth. The author listens to his readers but doesn't just accept everything we tell him to do or change, he first weights the pros & cons it will have on the story and then sees if it fesible to add in his story(also puts his own spin on the idea to make it unique). He is also growing(tremendously) as a new author and has made less and less grammar mistakes since he started writing. The MC is very likeable and has very deep character development (he's dumb at times, but he is still a kid). The background and setting of the story is very nice and in my opinion is a unique spin on novels with similar fantasy setting. If you like novels with: Weak to strong MC, Beast taming, System(Game elements), And Magic, this is the novel for you. Should be Top 10 in original works in my opinion, at least Top 20 just needs more chapters
I'm the author, of course i'd rate my own book 5 stars ........................................................................................................
WN why bring something that was already done long ago like really now.
There's some good reads yall can translate but don't instead bringing old things which won't see past chapter 40
i gave it 5 as it's a good read. thanks for the effort but please have more chapters added as the wait is really too long sir.
great story overall and hope that there will be more to come soon.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
U need read before turning down a title, this 5 star to balance the ratings. But, u can choose to read da status guy. And why a review need to have more than 140 damn word, ffs.
Where is this book
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i read 8 chaps and now i could tell that this is going to be a good story.
especially the meeting between the mc and tbe demon.
the author has a good writing style, the story is interesting, the mc is likable so yeah , read it
I'm gonna be true about this review.
First the writing quality: 3
It was well performed how you described the setting and characters. However, the way you write verb scenes, such as battle scenes, is awful. Additionally, your paragraph structure was unclear.
Example:
The beast lunged in his front with its club swing. Victor ducked down under it and dashed forward faster than the eye could see. He tore off both of its legs with a single slash. The ogre fell face forward.,
The paragraph itself is fine, but the construction is awful. Additionally, if you consistently use a word like lunged, a new reader will find it unclear (which is you can just use the word hopped, leaped, or jumped)
Updating stability: 5 updates a day
Story development: 4 its good for now
Character design: 4 since the paragraph structure was bad
Worldbuilding: 5. too early to say so just support