read only one chapter, can't say but hope for the best
Hello friends!! Hisao's journey is not over yet. Have to wait for vol.2 of this novel to know the update of his life journey. This journey will be more complicated and disturbing than you ever knew but it will have a happy ending for someone who never stops believing and never gives up on their life. Don't give up and keep going!!???
this novel is Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat!
Patiko, nors pasaulio įpatybiu daug nematėme bet istorija kuri pateikta savo vaga išpildo. Veikėjai nelabai turėjo galimybę atsiskleisti, tai gal vienintelis neigiamas atsiliepimas apie šią trumpa istorija.
Upon my journey to find interesting mc I def think Lance/Ellis is one of them and shaping to be what I think could be an interesting and complex story judging from the first two pages.
That was so freaking awesome, what in the world did I just read?!The author is amazing at story-telling and character development. You think you figured something but you get hit with a curveball!I didn't get it at first, but be patient as most of the unexplained is explained in due time in a way that makes sense and is easy to comprehend.I enjoyed reading this novel and can't wait for more chapters, t-there's still so much I need to know!
author, why is this marked as complete?Add more, please????. I love this book.?♥️?♥️?♥️?♥️?♥️????????????
This wasn't something I enjoyed and there are some insane levels of cringe. The novel focuses around skills etc, but within the first 15 chapters there is almost 4 months worth of time skips. During this period, many new skills were gained, but there is no introduction of them or any kind of description on what they do, just him suddenly activating a number of skills a few chapters later while mentioning he picked up a bunch of other skills that he might describe later, but probably doesn't. It just seemed like the story had no direction and was more like a diary/slice of life where nothing interesting happens. The world building was lacklustre. The characters introduced were all one dimensional placeholders. This novel was all over the place, which is a shame, because it looked like it had some potential.
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Guys, you need to relax and cut the author more slack on his first good novel. I love the concept of this world, and the world background building is utterly astounding. I also love the characters and actual story arcs with them. It doesn't make sense you guys don't care about the characters since there is honestly no guarantee darkness will spare them. Now for the criticism, this story gets 3.8 stars. I feel like the stability of updates should be a little better, maybe like a stable chapter every 2 days. Also, the novel's pacing is a little too fast and in the beginning, Thomas feels more like the main character than darkness. The romance between Darkness and Darkness simply doesn't make sense and feels extremely forced. There was no development to explain how she's there, It's also explained multiple times it's not in Darkness' nature to feel the romance. Yet, for some reason with absolutely no development, Mc meets the 'previous Darkness' and she loves him to bits as soon as she comes in. Also, the grammar is good but the punctuations and commas need to be more focused. Also, the wording in the sentences could use a bit more work in my opinion.
It was a good light-hearted read. After reading various rebirth novels, I feel that this was the much needed one. This is just some nobody we can all relate to and always fantasize about. All in all, I recommend reading it and I also look forward to what more you'll bring to us author :)
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