Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
The novel is good and would awesome if it still continues.And doesnt forget the other characters kee p up the awesome work.Its just slow at releasing chapters
AND I FUCKING THINK THAT THE AUTHOR HAVE NO WOMAN! AND THE AUTHOR EVEN PLAGIARIZED MY BEAUTIFUL CEO WIFE! THE FUCK IS THE AUTHORS PROBLEM! PLEASE DON'T READ THE STORY IT'S SO CRAPPY
wth HOW on earth did this trash get high ranking's like these, THE GIRL that slapped him and threw him out of the company is the girl he decided to live in shelter with and is gonna help her bro... and he is a fricken simp DUDE this is just stupid, gave a 2 cuz i like the apocalypse concept more specifically Zombie's too bad tho :((
A new dude on rise with horny harmones.Go for it such ruthless pervert.A new dude on rise with horny harmones.Go for it such ruthless pervert.
Seriously? MC can make things easier for himself by just cultivating for a week and he doesnt have the "patience" to do that? He would be beyond strong if he just stayed in his house and cultivated for a bit. I have never seen such a stupidly forced plot device.
I catch myself peeking if there is an update few times a day .Really well written great grammar and the story is smooth and gets you hooked . ...i really hope that the inner monster situation will turn up to be domination of stronger will (kinda like in bleach )anyway cant wait for what will author bring .(I'm really loving it so I'm gonna stay with "author" till the end)
So far read the first chapter and find it quite interesting. The characters' names are cool and the way the author designs them is fabulous. World development is something it makes you lost in the story.....Cheer up author .....its a good read
A good idea behind the story but after the first target I thought mc was going to be much more cruel than he was, but he became more of a pushover but then again its character development
Not my usual cup of tea, but I love it all the same. Great novel so far, I haven't really read many sporting novels but this one has a special place in my heart. The character development is fantastic and I'm able to form vivid images of the characters in my mind. The story has been building up nicely so far and I have high hopes for the future of this novel! Keep up the great work!
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Translation quality up until now from chapters 10 to 40 could definitely be better. Story development is trash, too much plot armor and plot holes. Characters are all brain-dead. World background was interesting at first but it's complete randomness now.