Not that good considering the other harry potter fanfictions. There is little to no character development and also does not stress much on the main character just keeps going on and on about the events. It seriously is not good, you can read it but don't blame me for not warning you
Actually a good novel if the author pays a little more time in story telling , editing and proof reading.I am actually hooked to it right now iwont reveal spoilers but if you are gonna binge read it, try it when your in a good mood or when you are not sleeping.
Writing quality sub-parStill not updated after 4 month Story development is mostly smooth.I have to say character design 6/10Not much of the world background is written.But still, this novel has great prospects if written carefully.Add more dialogue between characters, It feels like I am reading the report to the point. More dialogue will add humor to the story.A good novel has good humor, and a good writer has great comedy.
Title: 这个召唤师简直离谱Author: 橘炒鸡蛋Status: 183 chapters and ongoingThe description on Qidian is much shorter, and very vague, but the character names match so it should be correct.
All five because this amazing work deserves it. I hope the author will continue to write and surprise us with every chapter. The plot just keeps on getting better as you keep reading. Kudos to the author <3
Oh! Mukatterunuka muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda za warudo
This is a good story. Though there are only few chapters so far, but these chapters are written so well. It's interesting. Hope it won't be like those novels who are only interesting and good at the start and became trash later on. I'll add this in my library. Looking forward for more❣️
I am definitely loving your novel. I hope that continue the novel and do not drop it. Just hoping that you release 1 chapter daily . I hope your story finds success
Its like a good cupcake inside a very cumbersome packaging that takes alot of time to open/remove. The novel has a very interesting premise of rising up again to the top after the mc got killed BUT all of it is behind ALOT OF TALKING, FILLER CHAPTERS and 10+ CHAPTERS for just resolving a single event(a ****** negotiation? Yeah thats gonna take a dozen chapters to resolve).You'll find yourself skipping paragraphs or even chapters since most of the time it moves even slower than Dragon Ball Z. Cultivation chapters get like a couple after dozens of conflict/talking chapters which is just plain bs. Its like the author cant decide whether this is a political or a cultivation novel.There are people who like this VERY VERY SLOW novel but sadly this is not for me.
So far, I haven't seen the purpose of the story or the goal of the MC. Rather, I only see a protagonist that doesn't think of the consequences of his actions.You know, the story was confusing as the author didn't give full detail on how the system works.It also made me confused about why the price for his construction was so low that it seems to be losing business. Is it because of the price restriction of the system? Honestly, I don't know.This is why I am confused about the goal of the MC for constructing mutated buildings.Is it for profit, to level up the system, or something?
Just realized I didn't rate this...But just try it out! It gets much, much better. This is probably my favorite novel. You won't regret it!
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