This story is very enjoyable to read. I really like vrmmo novels and this is something different and I can't wait to read more of it.
Keep up the good work author and keep writing. =^-^=
This review is not a short little sentence giving five stars and saying a single sentence which is I liked it, nor is this a short review giving 3 stars say that it's not good and I expect better latter on. This is a real review giving genuine criticism something only a human can do not just some recycled line from a comment bot.
The writing is good simply put it's good your writing level is already near-professional I haven't spotted any typos or major grammatical errors most of your sentence flow well and have no issues with them.
Though your chapters are very sporadic and random, I'd recommend that if you write more than you need in a day you should stockpile. Them and wait a day or a few hours before reposting so it gets as much exposure on the updated list as possible so more people can see it. That way your schedule would be more organized afterward, and you would be able to get more views.
The main content for this is mostly religious text but the way that it's communicated is mostly through the author's personal anecdotes which is what makes the story worth reading. Just religious text and content may make a book but it probably wouldn't be good the bible already exists what's the need to rehash it.
The anecdotes in this story are good usually, anecdotes don't just stem from how interesting your life is but the context and what your willing to share. This story is pretty transparent you can see the reflection of the author in it which is what makes it good. You need reliability and humanity in a book and that's what makes it interesting what lets the reader sympathize and learn.
I'm not religious and I'm not interested in becoming religious I was an Athesist turned agnostic. I'm not going to lie I scoffed at parts in the story because it doesn't fit in with my ideologies. But I read it anyway so I'm going to share a personal anecdote.
When I was in school, Elementary or Preschool I can't quite remember I was talking to this kid he was talking about God and I told him I didn't believe in God he told me I was a sinner and he would never talk to me again, and he convinced a few other kids not to talk to me either I was pretty upset at the time, but after a few days I pretty much forgot about it I had my own friend group at the time and wasn't really affected. But after a month he came up to me and said he was sorry, he was in the wrong and he accepted that and apologized. Although I was young at the time I accepted it and moved on. The point of that is it doesn't matter if your religious or not all people are human beings and deserve as much respect if someone is an Atheist and in the wrong, they should apologize, same with Christians or any other religion, we're all people so don't go out of your way to antagonize people for their religion. You think you're just trying to persuade them into dropping their religion but you don't notice what it does to them afterward.
As for whether or not this really belongs on Webnovel who can say it's not something that you would conventionally see on this website. But as for if it belongs or not that's up to you author.
This story is great! I know lots of people out there loved the whole cultivation chat group thing but this one is seemingly just as good so far! The writing quality is good (why can’t most writers realize that “I” should be capitalized?) and the character is not completely flat like most original stories. Guaranteed there isn’t much character building yet but there’s like 12 chapters right now. But the way he interacts with the world around him stays constant and he doesn’t immediately change to some domineering individual once he becomes a magician. I hate it when stories have some meek hearted person then the moment he gets even the slightest bit of power he goes and crushes all other opposition and so far there have been 0 young master characters. So yay!
Chrysalis is a story about a human transforming into an ant monster in a world where every living creature has access to the System.
Writing Quality - There is little repetition that I noticed, which is an unfortunately common affliction among many of the novels on this site. It is easy to read and understand without seeming underdeveloped or basic. This is what should be the baseline for all the novels on this site to reach.
Stability of Updates - I binged the whole story over the course of 2 days so I cannot comment on stability. I have seen a few apologies by the author for being late occasionally, but the overall reader reaction is positive in this regard.
Story Development - At the time of this review, there are 446 chapters released. The story is fine. Anthony, a newly reborn ant monster, is sent out into the massive Dungeon and he wants to uncover why he was summoned and who is Gandalf (the name he gives the System), all the while undergoing adventures and meeting new people and monsters, and sometimes eating them. It has good pacing with lots of room left for new interesting events to occur.
Character Design - The Protagonist is the weakest link in this story. Put frankly, he constantly acts in a manner which infuriated me and a number of other readers by making stupid choices that a normal person wouldn’t make. I believe this is deliberate on the author’s part as it happens a lot but always seems to work out in the main cast’s favor in the end. Some wasted potential comes in the form of the main character’s backstory as a human. In order to keep this review spoiler free I will refrain from talking about it directly, but every time it appears I feel disappointed.
The other characters are better and far more interesting, if a bit cliché. I wish more time would be spent on them, but I also know that a similar web novel Kumo Desu Ga, Nani Ka? does just that and I can understand if the author wishes to be distinct from it.
World Background - The world building is where this story shines. At the start of many chapters, the author will give a snippet from some in-universe books which gives the reader some insight into the world of Pangera and those who live in it. The setting feels more lived in and real than most other #system novels that I have read and the protagonist is less of a prophesied hero and more like just another person in this world. Very Good.
Overall - if you are interested in something to pass the time in an enjoyable manner without having to pay ridiculous premium costs, then I can recommend this novel wholeheartedly.
Finally, 8 legs are better than 6.
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Its a good read, the MC is cunning and clever. Every character has their own development. The story is interesting ,I never got bored while reading it.ENJOY!!
This was a bit more than I thought it would be a chore for me. This will help with the fact that it has been a while since we've made a story
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The description of this book is mind-blowing and its character persona is top-notch. The storyline is great and can be read at ease. Its comprehension is lucid. I would recommend this book for any teenager to read.
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