AUTHOR WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED IN 5months?!
AtlEast out in the bio that you dropped it or something- ik there are a lot if negatuge reviews and frankly idc if u make alt accounts. JUST KEEP ON WRITING.
The MC is a hapless fool who gets everything a person needs only because the author wants him to. I guess people really love it when an undeserving fool gets it all because of luck without having any of the important qualities. They seem to like it even more when the MC is a talent less trash but with some super secret, super powerful ability.....
I wanna read it, but I'm not too sure about what that last sentence is supposed to imply. I'd rather not have a MC that forgives his wife for cheating on him or something like that.
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The novel is good..... Mc doesn't become outright OP, have little mental issues (which is expected with regression) please don't give it up. Though status page update would have been good. Like how while fighting his agility suddenly becomes 50?
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This is a solid 5/5. I love the way the storyline began. Although I'm not a fan of POV styled stories, this one got me pulled in.Hexarion is an interesting MC. Quite meticulous as well. This is worth reading, I recommend.
Shameless author review?! No. This is a sales pitch to you, the reader.You’re probably here for one of two reasons. Either you’re bored or are debating with yourself if you should read this novel or not. So I’ll be so kind as to solve all your problems right here and now. If you’re bored… just read the novel. It’ll cure your boredom, and it’s not like you have anything better to do anyway. Now that that’s out of the way, I will now be presenting why you should read this novel if you’re not sure yet. This story will make you sit down and stare at your device for so long that you forget where you are and how much time had passed by while you were absorbed by this novel. The only time you’ll even have the slightest clue of how much time you’ve spent reading is when your device runs out of battery or when you reach the latest chapter of this novel. Of course this is just me bragging so I’ll actually give you some statistics. If you’re sick of novels which randomly stop releasing chapters, this novel is the one for you. 180 chapters have already been stockpiled and 2 of them will be released every day. This is my second “proper” novel so I do hope that you give it a try since I’ve learned a lot from the mistakes I’ve made in my first one. I do have to say that I’m personally proud of the world building that went into this novel along with the memorable characters which all have important roles of their own. I believe I’ve made my case, so happy reading!
Me encanta, es lo que se busca en este tipo de historias con decisión y ejecución ?Muy recomendado para leerlo con toda la familia ????
[Reviewed on: 12-06-2021]
GOOD POINTS:
- Comical vibe through the chara of female demon/devil
- MC is reasonably smart, not too dumb to cringe at all
- The flow and pace is fine too
- Apparently there are no issues in grammar [will explain further below]
- Storyline somewhat resembles 'my pick up artist system' but no it's not a fanfic
- MC has a goal to achieve or he will die
- At first it gave me 'death note' vibe, then the devil felt a succubus to me as she emerged
- It was entertaining~
WEAKNESS:
- Synopsis doesn't really tells what's inside, it should be more elaborative on the contract aspect
- The initiative strategy in chapter 1 is extremely wrong
- No one wants to read the routine of MC, his house, work, what he is wearing, food, etc
- The narration is in personal/1st person but the repetition of 'I' is annoying, in about five lines 'i' is overly used seven times!
- 1st chapter should have begun by the later half, the upper half is completely dump in my opinion. Since 2 and 3rd chapters are without fillers and absolutely good with hooks, while 1st [initial half] is a turn off.
- Devil can read his mind but at places she doesn't respond to his thoughts, why?
This is the perfect Slice Of Life.
There are some dumb people who think the novel has to be done everything new. But Slice Of Life is cliches placed together. And the Author write the novel in a way that make these cliches look awesome!
If you are looking for something with a slow pace and amazing characters, this is the novel for you!
The characters have profundity and resemble anime characters.
There are no FaceSlapping or Nationalism.
So don’t worry about reading these boring stuff.