probably one of the most disappointing stories on here. the synopsis makes it sound fun and exciting, and there’s the whole buildup to when the aliens start merging, but the story stops literally before anything starts happening. we basically just read a prologue.
translations are almost as bad as non-straight up MTL can get. pronouns rarely accurate, often mistranslated phrases that make no sense. dodge if you can.
This is a really good story. Im really excited how this story will continue. The grammar is also really good. Keep up the good work Author
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So the MC was accused of stealing a super relevant technique. He was not tortured and they chose to keep him imprisoned and fed, without supervision. The ideal would be to justify this with: It is a Buddhist sect that preaches non-violence, so there is a prison that is overcrowded and the MC is poorly supervised because monks spend time training in meditation and him learning the way of buddha in prison is not negative. Or that the MC is from an elder's family and for the sake of preserving the male lineage he will be locked up until the elder comes out of seclusion and negotiates. Or my favorite there is a constant government spy hunt on the sects, but the government spies stole an object, and the technique is a false flag, the MC imprisoned by a false accusation obtains the object that actually has a technique inside.
I never try to write anything like this but for this story, I have to. My first thought was how far it could move me. When I read the first chapter, I just blinked and nodded. Alright. Not that bad. But when I finished the chapter Neo-Genesis. I wept tears. Yes, this man did cry. I was surprised that the author has a way to tell the story. If this novel were a man, he would have a high IQ and EQ because the storyteller is smart and smart to move this reader to feel like the characters. I like most of everything, plot, characters, the warmth of this family, and some little hints that the author already put in at the beginning. What I like the most is ‘less is more.’ The narration is not overdramatic. The author just tells his story and uses surrounding tools to show details which is simple but ‘deep’. Great job. Undisclosure is one of a few fictions I read on my smartphone and did not check how long the chapter is. I read it smoothly. There are some holes, for example, POV, the unnatural conversation. Or the writing of some scenes is not powerful enough to build emotions. But it’s just a little thing that I can overlook. I recommend it. This story should deserve more views.
Author hope you don't drop this work I'm expecting a lot from this novel in the future
An enjoyable book, the system the world has in place is interesting. Kill things to level up, level up to get skillpoints for upgrading and gaining new skills, eat things for bio points, mutate yourself with bio points. The writing speed has been consistent at 7 chapters a week for as long as I have been reading it. One of the nice things about this book is that the author has knowledge about ants and did some research. Now here are some ants for the Ant God.
I liked the story pretty much. The mc development is actually quite good. I lowkey like how the story is advancing.
Although there is always room for improvement
mind control mind control mind control mind control
Love it, love our protagonist he's someone you want to see succeed
stop até chap 15, dont like system slaves, The moment That goes, do The quest or Die.
The book title alone got me hooked up,and the first two chapters are intriguing. I can’t get enough of these chapters ?