I think you should work more on background skills but overall the plotline is great and I am looking forward to reading it. I already love Daniel and Silas. Good luck with your work.
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The plot moved at a leisurely pace for me. It didn't have to be established right away, but it did pique the interest of those who were attracted by the trope. As I continued to read the novel, I became aware that the MC's backstory was slightly off with his personality. And, given that it is his story, I believe the author is well-versed in it. So, reinforcing that point, I believe the author will go into greater detail about the narrative and the MC. And I believe there will be some growth in him, given he was once a mage and now wishes to become a cultivator for personal reasons. Of course, I suspect there will be a significant plot here, and I am hoping for it.
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The story isn't bad for what it is. There's not much character progression after the transmigration. The progression of the MC's strength has a problem. There's free attributes that the MC constantly earns. Yet we are left wondering if he uses them and how he allocates them. There's also chests but the author does not consistently tell us what is in the chest after they are opened. So you are left contemplating the MC's stats and load out. It is frustrating after a while. The author definitely isn't fleshing out the details.
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Written well . Very interesting character although is overpowered the writer still was able to maintain interesting story.
Keep writing and don't drop it
Why isn't new chapter comming????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Did something happen to author???????????????????
It's pretty good, but it's not "Modern Weapon Summoning System" but "Modern Weapon Shop System"
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I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes.
Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.