I gave it a shot and read 100 chapters because the author said the protagonist is OP and doesn't hide his powers much. Well, that was a lie.
The protagonist is weak and stupid. Let alone being OP, he's not even the top of his class. He's also very lazy.
He's described as someone more mature than his age would indicate, which is 16, but he acts like a 12 year old, so that's also a lie.
As for pacing... after 100 chapters, I feel like the novel hasn't even started yet. He has gone to school, been insulted the whole time for being trash, which is true, and now he's playing around in some random tower to find some healing elixir. So I'd say it's snail pace. Veeeeery slow.
Personally, I love this book. it's a masterpiece although I've seen the idea in some other books it's still amazing reading it. Please don't stop updating, Mage, or I'll...- *cough*Back to the topic, don't stop writing!
I liked it for a while but he started staying completely on canon and it's really irritating I can't go through everything cause I have work but this is just my honest opinion
one of best novels out there
not boring at all
Intriguing story so far(ch.28). I like the characters and the very evident setup for development. The interactions seem fairly natural. I am looking forward to how the power system will develop. Good luck author! Hope you can keep it up, I will be following.
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Just a bad repeat of the already terrible A Will Eternal.
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Writing quality: There are very few minor mistakes, the grammar is really good and you cannot really complain about it
Character design: He is a kind soul, which a lovely mother, his childhoos is sweet and hard at the same time, but as the story you will see him grow up, and it makes even sense! No stupid character, no unnessesary face slapping, I like how he grows, how he behaves, and cant wait too see more
Stoey development: Given a second chance in a new world, he has to grow up from an innocent child to a strong cultivator, the beginning is a bit harder to read but get over it! At some point you can clearly see the flow of the story of this masterpiece
Update stability: 3 chapters a week are good but I truly wish for more
World background: nothing known of as for now, only some basics
Good morning and happy day to you all. The fact of the matter is that this story is just great. I'm enjoying it very much. But the romance is just awful but I don't mind it that much. And the foreshadowing is honestly some of the worst I have ever seen. Yet somehow I am still reading this, and that is why it ( the story) deserves 5 stars.
Great novel for getting right to the point.
If you didn't read the prologues first and skipped to the main story (like me), you get thrust into the world very early.
The system is very nice, and the game is also nice. I find this story unique because the MC is very talented from the start.
I personally don't prefer MCs being so absurdly talented (in the real world), but I'd recommend you to give it a try
Cheers
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It's not bad, actually it's good, there's some mistake here and there(won't be mentioning tho, I'll leave to you readers to find out) (what can you say author, a little tactic so they'll read it, right? *evil laugh)
Just read it, warning tho, the update.. is kinda slow, I mean.. you can see it yourself.. One or two times update for a week, I think, or perhaps three.
Still read, and write a review too.
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