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That's quite a interesting story.hope you continue daily updates.
Really like how when he kills an enemy he only gets one random skill instead of all of them. Makes the story a bit more interesting and not tooooo OP. I also like how he got the essence absorbing skill to go along with his predation skill, getting two benefits from one monster is nice.
It really good you should give it a try, i can say that it worth your time after reading these chapters, the story is good , and the writing style is good too.
Bro author I have been giving you all of my power stones in hope that you won't drop this novel. Please Update , I really like this one .
Sooo there all this ass but the MC ain’t getting any???
I dropped it in the third chapter, I didn't like the way he said it was from another world, I simply can't stand things like that, it ruins the story for me just like 'The beginning after the end'. I dropped it.
While I don't fw heroic mcs per say, i don't hate a well written well either. I like that Takahiro is compassionate and is willing to work hard for his family. My gripes though is the system with a personality, but that's just my personal preference. some logical choices here and there also feel as he's not really thinking about his family, for instance in that moment he tries to stop the mugger which had high chances of injuries that could stop him from working he still rushed in, while admirable i feel as if he's not truely thinking of his family as it could put them ina further financial strain and and situation, and if i truely was thinking about them i'd have handled it another way instead of rushing in. But i've only read 2 chapters though so while i can't say too much on the direction I hope you put realistic and gritty scenes in it that set the real aspect in. That moment he distributed his stats also urked me, I mean at least put 100 in each stat at least bro.Anyways it has potential if given the right direction, character insight and introspection and reflection, your writing is also well done, concise and fairly well paced which i liked. I hope you succeed in the story you wish to carve.
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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
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Story is good overall, just lacking world building and mc being too much of a simp.