Okay...here's my fresh out of the keyboard review.BORING. CLICHED. FILLERS.The story offers nothing new. It follows the same trend as other female MC novels of similar type.Right from the mysterious male lead to MC's cheat service, there's nothing fresh or interesting The author has copied points from other famous female novels. The General household, the overly loving grandpa, the amputated uncle, the lists simply goes on and on.Even here the arcs are not well executed. They feel disjointed and rushed. The flow that needs to be there, is lacking. Overall it looks more like reading a series of short stories.Female MC's character...difficult to say. Author has tried to make her a badass swindler MC with the generic doctor history. He failed.She looks more like an arrogant antagonist out of a Xianxia novel. Her swindling is forced and clearly unbelievable. Either she's so charming that the swindled person can't realise or the swindled person is so dumb that he doesn't realises You again have the set of characters required in a female MC novel from a general household. The PM house, the fiancee prince , the king etc.Their character build is extremely plain with nodepth.Anyway I can't find any redeeming factor about this novel apart from it being a female MC novel.The author has played safe. A disappointing read full of cliches after cliches joined with chapters full of fillers. The only fun point: the novel is fast, the translator is great.Nixes (As of chapter 60)
Firstly, the concept of the novel seems intriguing and full of potential. The idea of exploring a world where humans have evolved due to a catastrophic event and the juxtaposition of advanced technology and human greed is a captivating premise that could attract readers.Secondly, the main character's journey of self-discovery and redemption through his second chance at life could make for a compelling story. The mystery surrounding his return and the world he finds himself in creates an engaging plot that could keep readers hooked.Finally, my advice would be to focus on creating well-developed characters and an immersive setting that transports readers to this futuristic world. Consider exploring themes of human nature, morality, and the consequences of our actions, which could add depth and meaning to the story.Overall, keep writing and exploring the possibilities of this unique and exciting world you have created. ?
It’s a nice novelStart I think is goodI wish that there would be more interaction with his summons but as of the latest chapters we slowly got better in that regard Well the only thing is that I get a feeling that the chapters are a little watered down (we do get repeated informations that we already know quiet some time )Overall it’s a good read and I would recommend ?
Bruh Dragons in this Novel talk about balance but then kill for no reason other then their hurt pride thousands of years ago?u200d♂️??????????
The storage room was pretty huge. It didn't only work as a document archive room, but also kept several materials from the suppliers.
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King threw him out for being uselsss and he suddenly want to him back and apologize when he knew he had gotten power and he doesn't feel guilty and he wants NAOKA to fight for his continent i mean where is common sense well MC is useless without system so if he didn't have system so far it's good mc doesn't spare anyone he just kill them cant wait whare mc kills his way continent and destroy the continent and kill his mom dad and his freinds
holy sheetttt what a good novel. no so cliche development. and the romance not too rushed but can still be better. hope this can be picked alongside I am not a son of providence
*ahem* Fellow daoist it's Swordfane, not profane but the thought it appreciated! I finally have more free time so the novel speed will ramp up. I plan to finish a volume every month and complete the story in 2-3 months. Thank you for giving it a chance!
Nooooo!!!! He was finally going to explore.....I love your fanfic now this novel with the same MC ofcuz I want more...Plz come back!!!( plz update BOTH )
Seems interesting,I love it as soon as see the female ceo in the story. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's a must read!! Different from all supernatural stories. There is a bit of everything. Loved the funny parts!! So creative! Very Well written but easy to understard! I more than recomend!