updates please, 2nd day without them
Really cute story!
It's truly effortless and delightful. The storytelling is subtle without excessive melodrama, and there are no unnecessary misunderstandings between the main characters, which I find to be quite pleasing.
The novel is a blend of commendable prose and a skillful translation, yet it suffers from certain flaws. I appreciate the author's unique expressions, but the characters' dialogue feels flat and one-dimensional, which detracts from the overall experience. Additionally, I perceive a subtle encouragement of suicide within the narrative. The protagonist's own act of suicide leads to a seemingly happier existence, which might be misconstrued as a solution for those struggling with severe depression. While it's true that not everyone takes online novels seriously, this aspect is still a concern.
To those criticizing the writing, it's important to understand that the main reason for the protagonist's reincarnation was to seek happiness. The system he encounters conveniently facilitates his goal, which aligns with his initial motivation. However, I acknowledge that this may be missed by readers who have not delved deep into the story.
It's unfair for those who haven't read extensively to offer judgments. To those casually commenting without fully engaging, I implore them to pause. Despite these points, I believe the novel doesn't quite deserve a perfect 5-star rating, despite its commendable portrayal of depression.
Seems like there's promise in the story.
Problem is the translation. It's not that it's bad and unreadable, but it seems like there is a lot of lost nuance to the dialogue in particular. That makes following the plot kinda arduous and a bit of guesswork.
Yeah, that stands true for straight, yuri or yaoi all. The pair has nothing to do with how well the plot and world can be
U silly weird man ?
The translator is getting too experienced... and I suspect there is a traitor in our midst... catch them before it's too late
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PRAISE THE KANG TOTEM ???
Only until 90? I've read debut or die and it was amazing, I had the same vibes for this mc but when you actually read the story further you'll see HUGE differences. It's not the first novel with a blunt personality mc in these settings you know? So it's kinda normal if you sometimes get déjà vu. I don't recall Moondae being an actor, rapper, find his past life's family and I don't see June with a colleague list, shop, chat window and trait roulette with his system. This kind of developpement is sort of a classic one and a lot of novels starts this way. ＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)
"This is one of the rare novels I read in its machine translation (MTL) version prior to an official translation. Although it initially challenged my comprehension, I found it engaging and well-paced, providing a delightful reading experience."
It is done bruder
Is it done?