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Reading this book like watching anime, I immediately imagine the situation in my head like I watch it. The writing isnt best but the plot is interesting and well build story. Looking forward how the author will develop the story.
The novel is very amazing ???? When do you open closed classes ??? I can't open the chapter ??? I don't know what to do and the events are wonderful and I want to know what will happen ???
Okay book. What I like: Writing quality is good. The quality is consistent and I'm enjoying it. But, it could add with some more description. Story development is good. It's pretty interesting. I like how the system doesn't give him everything (read to find out) and how it's not completely cliche as the Mc was the 4th strongest of the world. But it could get rid of some of the cliche elements like: Archehon causes trouble, Archehon wins, Archehon goes back to do something else. But seeing how the author is a newbie, I'll look over it. Character design is okay. Could definitely improve a lot on describing them since it's hard to know how they look like exactly. Updating stability is something idk. since I started reading this after the break. (I hope the author comes back from the break since I'm enjoying the book). World background is amazing. I like some of the unique ideas and names the author comes up for the abilities and heroes. This is by far, my favourite element. Overall, decent book. Before I rate it again, I need to get more chapters. :D
This is the only second novel I wrote the reviews for. After reading countless transmigration novels. This novel is the better written and more believable. The character grew step by step and was able to overcome the challenges through trials and errors, and efforts rather than plot armour. The world stage setup is also good and within believable spectrum. In short, its a fantasy but no absurd. The language is good. The use of words shows that research on the type and descriptions were made. This is a good read.
Title of this novel should be "Another unbalanced MMORPG: Dumb luck specialist".
MC is lucky dumbass. He played underpowered class for a month staying at level 1. Then he got ultra lucky mining drop that turned him into OP character (cause you know game balance is a ****). He had 0 contact with other players, knows 0 information about his class and is without his main class weapon (puppet) even though everyone had one. But somehow he is expert player???
Then character development... Except for playing the game he may be ficus for all we know. And considering style i doubt that he will develop later.
Worldbuilding... except badly designed game, we know absolutely nothing about RL. Also you get info dump about game here and there.
Overall badly written novel. There are much better quality written game novels out there.
I like this work, mostly becouse the story feel fresh for me and the chill that i got when reading alone (i'm afraid of ghost yet still reading this work) and some comedy scene to balance it. Uh, i just got the 'right' feel from this, just read it and you will know.
Being an avid reader on this platform, and video games being one of my favorite genres, I do have to say that is is one of the better books here. The pros: the world background, and the characters are quite nicely developed. Although the reincarnation trait is very overused, it is implelemted nicely in this book. Another thing is that the game also has solid mechanics, no logic holes in it, at least none that are huge. Cons: the start of the book is rather slow and chaotic, and might be hard to push through. There are small grammatical errors, and some logic holes. However, none of the cons are very large. In summary, this is a rather good book, I encourage you to read it, and I encourage the author to continue writing and updating this story.
Racist as Fuck, too many patriotic propaganda, Shitty abusive mc r a
ok was I the only one who expected mechas here?by mechs this story is referring to androids or combat robots If you will.nevertheless this is not the reason I Jared this story.the reason is it has NO SOUL.AND THE STORY TELLING SUCKS.like the author is so bad at this, he has used the most irritating wuxia trope and magnified it a hundred times over.This story has nothing but killing, killing, and killinghundreds of random side characterseach time a villain is killed two stringer ones stand up in its place.like some sort of levelling quest.the same repetitive cycle.for the first 40 chapters.the guys seems to be moving is a different direction towards the end bit that doesn't compensate the lack of story.I know almost nothing about the main character.who he was, what are his hopes and dreams.and the most importantWHAT IS HIS MOTIVATION?WHY THE HELL IS HE FIGHTING SO HARD AND KILLING PEOPLE AROUND.no proper explanation given, the guy is like oh I was transmigrated, a face slap there another face slap here.he stands in my way kill!he looks ugly kill!he said something annoying kill!what normal person starts killing at the blink of an eye.without an even proper motivation to begin!
This copy paste novel got chosen over War Truck In Apocalypse and other good novels what a pity! So sad I really wanted to read something good.
Great story all around the MC is a bit hesitant of a guy for his personality though. Other than that not many complaints and I approve this as a good read to spend your time on.
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