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Interesting story. Just the fact that he is playing support instead of generic swordsman is a big plus on my side.
Unfortunately it is extremely slow paced and combined with the slow update it makes a potentially great novel into something forgettable.
By the time i have enough to read again i might have forgot a great deal of it since nothing significant and marking happened yet.
Grammar is a little bad. But other than that, it is a great book. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
First time I've ever seen a novel use good culture for powerful moves. I love the piano and the harmonica is a plus don't know enough about the harmonica I'm open to the idea.
There aren't enough reviews. Well, I'll write something myself. At the moment. I also ask you to be more tolerant, after all, this is my first novel, besides, my English skills are not good and I periodically have to use an online translator, I hope you will understand. What do I want to bring with my work? Yes, in general, nothing, I just read all the good harem novels that had a fairly large volume, and I got bored, so I thought- " I'm probably not the only one, maybe at least I can help others brighten up the gray everyday life?". That's it!
C'est incroyable comment sa va trop vite en a peine 3 chapitre le mc est deja surpuissant .ensuite le livre va si vite qu'on a meme pas le temps de connaitre la famille du mc ou qui est il qu'il a deja remplacer son pere biologique par le chef de la mafia.
Overall, story isn't bad. Plot seems believable, but some parts are kind of rushed. Please get a good editor and fix all those grammar mistakes - don't just use google translate or thesaurus. Also, don't drag out and mansplain too much.
I didn't like it to be honest, MC is as dumb as a rock and his system is way overpowered and can't let you be emerged in the story, the world building is ...well not good... anyway U didn't like it... and thanks
I don't know if my review was deleted or my memory slipped, anyway this is harem so it's worthless trash unfit for sane individuals. Basically this is why harem will forever be trash, the name has "WIFE" but he gets a harem and his "WIFE" basically hates him for most of the novel, of course the mc is stronger than his "WIFE" because screw the title. Of course you can't forget the "Everyone conspires against him for no reason" add a bit of "Everyone get's so surprised how powerful he is, even though he was supposed to be a playboy waste, he's able to solve every situation and we'll just ignore the guy outsmarting everyone and label him as still being a playboy" to get a small fraction of the trash cliche part, next is the fact that we don't even see the other females at the beginning, they have no history with the man, and suddenly the "Mass murdering female general wife" Is ok with multiple people dating her husband after 5 seconds of knowing him. Harem is only good to ruin stories and draw in gullible teenagers to warp their view on how relationships work, just to earn 5 more dollars by writing something without even putting work into the side-wives. Alright that'll be all for my rant on the worst type of book genre, so bad anything with it is automatically worthless trash. For the story it's cliche trash, borderline qidian, but good enough that you can't fully turn your brain off to actually read the thing.
Average novel. Screams average. One might like it or one might not like it. For me it was just 'eh'. Somewhat tasteless and bland. Up to you.
terrible. the sect and the juniors are basically just a footnote
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Yes the book deserve 5stars.The mc is little naive for now but everything workout good.Author just keep in mind to not show any discrimination in the future as it could have negative effect on the novel.Overall i like the slice of life and buisness building novels so its is on my fav list.
