Good story so far, some grammar needs fixed. Keep up the good work i'm looking forward to you finishing it.-,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I like the story with new MC looking forward for more chapters and continue the story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Absolute trash advice, as expected by Chinese trash authors. Unbelievable that people give this more than 1 start. If you follow any "advice" from this your novel will end up as a terrible mess. Look for some real advice from good authors.
A good read, not very original but good enough to read and expect something new to it. It’s a shame but we’ll need quite a while to know the rest and it hasn’t been picked up yet.
anyone know the raw?
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While the premise was fairly decent, the writing needs to be changed quite a bit. The character dialogues needs to be in separate sentences sometimes. What you did here just made everything feel cramped and cold to read. I'll take a paragraph from your novel as an example here;
----------------------------------------------------------------------------Alright, open the gates. The commander wanted to meet him", Rex ordered. "Yes sir!" one of the guards took out a key from his pocket before unlocking the metal door. The sounds of the metal door opening reverberated across the hallway. "We'll go in now. Close the door after", said the white-haired man. "Yes commander. Good luck!" said both of the guards simultaneously as they watched both Rex and the white-haired man walked inside.
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I'll continue my review in the comment for this review
looked interesting and fresh for a few chapters. but i guess a bunch of idiots spamming comments about how it didn't fit the usual troupes and them believing that is how the world should work forced the author to change the novel into a generic cultivation one.
This is my second review for one of my top favorite books and also one of my top favorite authors, Mr. Sloth. This work is awesome. With a simple, Slow-paced, addicting style. You may want to curse the author for so many cliffhangers. But we need to bear with it. I just hope that the author keeps on writing this. So I can keep on enjoying it.
Tips for new readers:-
If you are a new reader. Do remember to take some breaks or you may end up fapping the whole time.
Caution:- This work is addicting. Read at your own risk.
Really enjoying the build up so far.Unlike most novels, this gives a fresh perspective on MC. From the author's words its clear he is creating an MC who doesn't have any cheats.I am 20 chapters in and the MC is still searching for a cultivation technique. He isn't OP yet and it looks like he will take some time to become OP.A common person's perspective on cultivators is also unique.Here they are not thought of gods, rather as demons. Truly, what does it matter to a mortal if a cultivator is good or evil? Having great hope for this novel...
I really hope this get picked up. ……………………………………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………………..
I like this and while not as reward rich as insinuated the rewards are top notch and suitable to his situation I'm looking forward to future chapters .
What drew my attention to this novel? The Yande-*cough* definitely the System tag, always been a big system enjoyer. The story is very promising and doesn't have anything to complain about, yet. I'm gonna keep following this novel to hopefully see it prosper.